Narcissus Survived

And fields and springs faithfully prayed
with hope and love, in life`s sacred dance.
In beauty of his mind, Narcissus survived.

And lovely seasons never would be fade,
because the travel met the hope`s grass.
And fields and springs faithfully prayed.

And so, the people part was well weighed:
good deeds, and good will in human stance.
In beauty of his mind, Narcissus survived.

And sweet like honey, could be always made
this life with all its joys` and sorrows` chance.
And fields and springs faithfully prayed.

And finally, no reasons stayed to be afraid
by travel, and its expected change.
In beauty of his mind, Narcissus survived.

Metamorphoses in role the being had played
as time, prepared what he might advance.
And fields and springs faithfully prayed.
In beauty of his mind, Narcissus survived.

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Date: 7/24/2019 8:17:00 AM
So many great lines in your poem, like : And lovely seasons never would be fade...AND...And sweet like honey, could be always made...AND..And finally, no reasons stayed to be afraid. Keep writing!
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Date: 7/23/2019 11:53:00 PM
survived and flourished, well done.
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Date: 4/2/2019 12:59:00 AM
A lovely villanelle; these are hard for me to write; other poets do them quite well.
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