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Naps Hurt

I took a nap on the sand at the beach
A  little tan was the goal to reach
Didn't realize I was that sleepy
Until my body burned completely
Went from being light skin to peach



FOR YOUR SNOOZE YOU CHOOSE CONTEST

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Poet Destroyer A

July 12, 2010 at 9:59 AM

wow!! still enjoyed the second time around..you snooze you lose,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 28, 2010 at 9:40 PM

It can happen.. Faleshia..am so sorry to hear of your vision problems.. hope u will check it out at the doctor and maybe its a simple procedure or surgery as I had to have to correct your vision to make it well again... keeping u in my daily prayers... my friend... let me know what is going on please... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation..

Andrea Dietrich

June 20, 2010 at 10:18 PM

well, I think peach does not sound as bad as the apple red that I would get!! hahaha. Love it. I think I fell asleep once and really did get burned! LUv, Andrea ps good title to this one too