Naomi's and Stanley Torment - the Villanelle of the Home
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Naomi's and Stanley Torment - The Villanelle Of The Home
Naomi couldn't stop thinking about the home
It was just so splendid and perfect
so excited that she was approved of, the loan
That morning, Naomi was shocked by the stones
All around the garden she had to calm herself
Naomi couldn't stop thinking about the foam
All around the kitchen faucet
The hot water came out cold and salty
She tried to focus on a plumber
But she could never remember the number
Stanley her husband tried to distract her with a hug a kiss
Said it was time to start thinking about an a home inspection
Naomi couldn't stop thinking about the homes misdirection
Naomi took action like a champ
The home was becoming too circumspect
But she could never forget the tone
As her husband took the roll
Before signing the closing papers
Naomi nosedived like a happy baby born
Her mind turned into a defect
Naomi couldn't stop thinking about the home
But she could never forget the passing loan
Before hand the plumbers came and fixed the problem
2/21/20
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2020©
Copyright © James Edward Lee Sr. | Year Posted 2020
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