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Bite Size 124, Line Gauthier, 9/27/2025

Nanoseconds of Dusk

Nominal names carved on our tree.
Bird’s world etched in nocturnal bliss.
Naivety in nanoseconds of dusk.
Bee’s nascent love - an innocent kiss.
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DiMino Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:07 AM
Indeed, much occurs in a nanosecond -- time can stop...become and eternity for some. Deep an interesting subject. You get a FAV!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:27 AM
Thank you, dear Joe! I appreciate! Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 3:35 AM
Quite a short time for a kiss. A really innocent kiss.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:28 AM
LOL!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 5:18 PM
outstanding....especially liked 'naivety in nanoseconds of dusk....that's just beautiful and unique.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:28 AM
Thank you so much, dear Sara!
Prothero Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Evocative... lovely poem.
Hind Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 12:10 PM
This romanced me off my feet!! I love this whole concept, "birds and bees" - making time. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:28 AM
LOL! So glad you liked!
Greenhough Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 12:02 PM
This is a lovely story of the calm at dusk. Thank you for including my honey, the bees.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:29 AM
You’re welcome… big ;)
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