Naming a Hurricane

A morning in a gown of mist and dewdrops
Blankets my world with her warmth
I bask in her torrential shower of love
And slip into her tropical depths 

Last night we shared a dream to a distant shore
Something in our hearts that only love can reveal
An untouched paradise for us to soar
In search of its first lovers’ feel

You’re a question waiting to be answered
A strong vision in need of a visionary
And to you – I vow to always speak the truth
I pray to fulfil someone so extraordinary

The heavenly sight of a thousand angels
Circling as you descend on the wing
And there in the eye of your perfect storm 
Your rumbling praises I will sing

And as you land – I worship at your feet 
A hurricane off the scale – your name reserved 
My sunrise there in your stormy eyes
A vortex of love on your hurricane wind


Thabang Jan Ngoma
07-16/2015

Sponsor: Casarah Nance
Contest Name: Flirt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/24/2015 6:04:00 PM
THABANG. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
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Date: 7/21/2015 8:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win Thabang!
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Date: 7/21/2015 2:02:00 AM
Lovely....'You’re a question waiting to be answered. A strong vision in need of a visionary' great, congrats. Regards, Siz
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Date: 7/20/2015 9:07:00 PM
This positively soars, Thabang, what a wonderful write. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:37:00 PM
THABANG, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/20/2015 2:40:00 PM
Evening Skatie...thank you for the love always (:heers, Tbang
Date: 7/20/2015 2:34:00 PM
what amazing imagery Thabang a lovely descriptive write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/20/2015 2:37:00 PM
Hi Jan...thank you as always...I'm feeling your warm hugs this cold evening (:heers, Tbang
Date: 7/20/2015 2:03:00 PM
Very descriptive, nicely done.
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/20/2015 2:12:00 PM
Hi Casarah...thank you for the opportunity to partake in your contest (:heers, Tbang
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