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contest Nameless,Nightmare,Neglect Words

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Nameless

The years of youth lost...unrecoverable,
from a life of debauchery.
   Where all the faces are now nameless.
   From the fresh scent of Spring,
   through the endless Summers,
   and the romantic Autumns,
   to the warm blankets of Winter
All have come and gone,
   like the wind or a passing storm
that drenched the days and nights,
in layers of passionate interludes
   that have become hollow memories,
like a shooting star that burned brightly
then gone, fading to black,
leaving nothing but an after-image
as a reminder that bled the soul
and came with the price of loneliness,
where a hole in the heart grew larger
and could never be filled,
   it's where nothing lived long,
and the toll was silent pain,
from the highs and lows
   when passion was bartered
to heal the wounds that cut deepest,
when the heart was young and innocent
and became a traveler, seeking different realms,
finding fool's gold, held in the hands of a court jester,
who sat alone in a crowd, counting shadows,
   that are mere nameless faces,
from yesterday's empty illusion of passion
that turned cold and distant once expressed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alex Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 9:33 PM
"a hole in the heart grew larger and could never be filled" - a beautiful symbolic image. Congratulations!
Empress Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 12:11 PM
I read this twice, because the first time i read it i got lost between your lines and verses, so beautifully crafted with sincere emotions. The way you use nature to depict life experiences is so profound and creative, i especially love the lines “ like a shooting star that burned brightly then gone, fading to black” time… how it fleets… so many nameless faces lost through time. Congratulations on your win, well deserved it is. A fave too
Manassian Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 2:53 AM
You have a gift, dear. I enjoy your writes and empathise with the author. A feeling of emptiness prevade.... nostalgic undertones nestle in the heart.
Parker Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Eileen you are always touched by deep emotional poetry, glad to hear from you, thank you for your kind response
Rose  Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:11 PM
you express yourself so well Frederic, enjoyed this poem
Parker Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 5:14 AM
thank you Mystic, it's been a while
One Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 2:55 PM
An excellent take on this theme for the contest.. I could see your life story portrayed through your words, well a part of it.. you have a wonderful way with words..
Parker Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 5:14 AM
yes, Silent One...to a point, thank you for your kind response
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 11:46 AM
- "nameless faces, from yesterday's empty illusion of passion" ... a painful toll to pay - A deep and sad poem, Frederic - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Parker Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 5:12 AM
thank you Anne for your kind reply
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