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it was the shock
of how suddenly
it dawned on me

how it was obvious
i could hear it
it was quite noticeable
there was no hiding it

there was something 
different in my voice
an irrepressible sparkle
and that's when i knew

i knew they too would know
but him, he'd be destined 
to be the last to find out


AP: 2nd place 2024

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Date: 8/23/2024 8:30:00 AM
Interesting one. Thanks for sharing it with us. I appreciate the honor of placing in your contest. Thank you for reading it and honoring it by listing it as a placer. Sara K
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 8:25:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara ~ have a lovely day
Date: 8/20/2024 8:34:00 AM
Very nice.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 8:26:00 AM
Thanks, Mike ~
Date: 8/13/2024 4:20:00 PM
Ha. I love the humor of this. So clever, Line. It was great seeing you at my poem yoday
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Andrea ~ have a fabulous day

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