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Naked Truth Grook




We are very civilized people
We hate nudity and banned ****
We cover everything - even the naked truth
Rape is prevalent - but, we do it in private
Only the poor children can be found naked here
Sorry, we could not cover them all

12.02.16

ironysatiretruthgrook

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Pashang Salehi

March 5, 2016 at 10:26 AM

Nicely done... you deserved the win...

Anindya Mohan Tagore

March 5, 2016 at 9:48 PM

Thank you so much, Pashang, for the read. Hugs, Bobby

Paul Callus

February 19, 2016 at 1:18 PM

No wonder this poem came first in the contest, Anindya! It is very creative, while the presentation is deep hitting and to the point. Whichever way we look at it, truth knows no compromise. # 7 Congratulations! // paul

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 19, 2016 at 1:26 PM

Paul, your encouraging words drizzled like blessings on me. This humble one bows to the great one. Thank you so very much... warm regards, Bobby

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2016 at 7:51 PM

wow, this is really good poem!! Congrats on the wonderful win

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 18, 2016 at 9:51 PM

Thanks a lot Andrea. Learning from you people. XOXO, Bobby

Poet Destroyer A

February 18, 2016 at 2:07 AM

Bobby, thank you for the reply. LINDA

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 18, 2016 at 9:49 PM

XOX

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 17, 2016 at 11:18 PM

Congrats on ur superb winning write Anindya.

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 18, 2016 at 1:50 AM

So nice of you, Dr. Sharma. Warm regards, Bobby

Poet Destroyer A

February 17, 2016 at 9:49 AM

Hi Bobby, Congrats on your Grook win. XOX ~LINDA~

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 17, 2016 at 9:57 PM

Thank you so much, Linda. XOXO, Bobby

Nette Onclaud

February 17, 2016 at 8:33 AM

you did this so well, anindya..big congrats on your shining win!..huggs

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 17, 2016 at 11:35 AM

Thanks a lot Nette. Truly honoured. Hugs, Bobby

Reason A. Poteet

February 17, 2016 at 7:50 AM

Excellent grook, excellent piece in general with much metaphor and color. Love the satirical last line which adds irony to the this poetic elements you used. Congratulations on your first place award.

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 17, 2016 at 11:30 AM

So nice of you dear friend. Thanks a lot for your analytical view. Truly humbled. Warm regards, Bobby

Teddy Kimathi

February 17, 2016 at 2:04 AM

Greetings Anindya. Congrats for your well, deserved #1 placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 17, 2016 at 11:26 AM

Thanks a lot Teddy. Hugs, Bobby

Susan Gentry

February 17, 2016 at 1:57 AM

Congratulations!

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 17, 2016 at 11:24 AM

Thanks a lot Susan. Hugs, Bobby

Janice Canerdy

February 16, 2016 at 11:41 PM

Good job on this poem that tells the unvarnished truth. Congrats on your top win. Janice

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 17, 2016 at 12:34 AM

Thanks a lot Janice. Hugs, Bobby

Timothy Hicks

February 16, 2016 at 5:09 PM

Congratulations on the much deserved first place win! The blunt lines in this poem made for a very hard hitting political piece, that leaves a heavy impact. You covered a lot of ground in such a short piece, and found it clever how the naked children are also "the naked truth". Even without rhymes (which is hard to do for a grook!).

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 17, 2016 at 12:31 AM

Timothy, truly humbled. I have written whatever I firmly believe and raised my voice boldly. Happy to know that you people liked it. Naked truths are always blunt and bitter which we often try to overlook. But, the truth remains unchanged. I think, it is our duty to face it and find out solutions. Much love & hugs, Bobby

Sam Jameson

February 16, 2016 at 4:00 PM

Congratulations on the win, a nice piece of work on a challenging contest. Well done!

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 17, 2016 at 12:02 AM

So nice of Sam. Truly honoured. Warm regards, Bobby

Jan Allison

February 16, 2016 at 3:02 PM

Many congrats Bobby - a very powerful poem:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 16, 2016 at 11:59 PM

OMG! I just cann't believe it... This was my first attempt to write a grook. Before writing this I have done little study and found that in this format I can hit it hard. So, I had taken out my heart in my hand and written whatever I felt truly. Thanks a lot for giving me such an honour. Love & hugs, Bobby

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