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Naked pain – abandoned hope Treasure chest of dreams Put to rest Visions across the forest floor With leaves in hues of amber Scarlet and gold Crunching against Deep, black earth Decomposing Fading into Death Bare, aching sorrow Breathing through my soul In waves of agony Piercing my heart With grief From the Loss Of Peace Rich, brilliant promises Of flowing lights Beaming across The darkness of night In whispers of Intimacy Encouraging A victory For hope Faith Limitless, lasting love Dancing through the Spirit of one who Listens faithfully To the sounds That come from A heart who hears God’s breath In each noun Each verb Every idea The thought That breaks through Fear, doubt, angst To sooth and sweeten The music that plays A melody of faith Sighing gently In soft rhythms Of the heart beating Sensing the longing That caresses With a flow Of love

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Date: 1/31/2021 12:28:00 PM
Some people, if not most, look at death as a form of release from burdens and obligations. You have written these imaginative verses quite well.
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Date: 1/31/2021 8:43:00 AM
We, mortals, would be pleasantly surprised to find out that death is nothing so dreadful as we think it to be! Excellent work, dearest, Regina!
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Date: 1/31/2021 3:16:00 AM
Death. I feel it so near. Now I have to take two vaccines and I dread them. I only Had one flu vaccine in my life and it made my life miserable. ~~
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