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Naked Neighborhood

the still muted leaves. . . soon revelation of homes secreted away — the Autumnal sweep, bitter cold of Winter will reveal 11/6/2019

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/8/2019 8:58:00 AM

Well penned.I can sense Winter to enter.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/7/2019 9:20:00 PM

Came back to this one. I'm still shivering at these images. ~ Grizzly Brrrrrrr

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2019 9:48:00 PM

Come back anytime ;)

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 11/7/2019 7:20:00 AM

Naked and wet, as far as I can see. Damn anticyclone licked snow away. I don't even want to go out for a drink( Bring youself, poet, do it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2019 7:36:00 AM

Yikes! Sounds like crazy weather!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2019 7:20:00 PM

Lovely, Kim, great imagery

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2019 7:58:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/6/2019 5:05:00 PM

Your title --- not that it got my attention or anything --- is a perfect fit for this tanka. ~ Naked City

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2019 7:58:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/6/2019 2:04:00 PM

What a great metaphor, I usually think of streets as 'naked' in a way, when they are stripped of their leaves and grass.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2019 4:41:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/6/2019 1:17:00 PM

Hello Kim, yes winter is on the way. It is suppose to snow today. I guess winter is here. have a nice day my friend. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2019 4:41:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene!

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/6/2019 11:28:00 AM

Lovely poem, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2019 11:32:00 AM

Thank you, Line!