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Premiere Contest WinnerNaked Heart

If you have seen her face and not the soul
then you have never known anything at all...
pines, orchids, fireflies light the June nights
yet they sleep when dark morning bows
          its barren crown: and there in slumber,
are their eyes awake to see the
glory behind the mist?

Lines, curves of a woman we behold
as summer blooms, but it is in winter
           when her naked heart blazes
until the tiny lamplights of her body
weep, giggle, and invigorate.

The rage and silence of her inner lenses,
these do you not discover?
She opens the gates of her moans
for walls to expose her supple pearls,
         this child- maiden rippling  between waves
and unclothed seeds, unbidden…

If these you cannot grasp, 
then you will never behold her bare splendor.


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Naked Contest of Anthony Slausen
11/14/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Beaufort Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 6:21 AM
This is a beautiful poem and so true. It's magic. Thank-you.
James Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Brilliant writing well done on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 7:12 PM
wonderful win, Nette. Congrats to you.
Gasun Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Superb write as always my dear friend, Nette! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! Many hugs and cheers! love lots, Lory
Capitano Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 4:33 AM
Delightful. Congrats on a deserved win.
White Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 11:58 PM
I love the beautiful sensuous poem you wrote, and the picture goes so well with it. Congratulations :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 9:24 PM
Lovely imagery, nette. Congratulations on your trophy win. You deserve it. Blessings, Janis.
La France Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Nette oh such a beautiful write CONGRATULATIONS on First Place in the contest,.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Lovely poem, Nette! Congratulations on your top win!
Roper Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 1:26 PM
Wow!!! magnificent poem, Nette, I love the vibrant colors of the image you have paint... Congratulations on your podium win..... Hugs Eve
Parker Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 11:04 AM
congratulations my poetic friend a verse of pure understanding about the female spirit and smack down of the male grasp of its content over their limited view
Martin Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Excellent write. Congrats on a well deserved win! :-)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:11 AM
It seems I was right in my assessment. Hugs and. O grate on your top placement!
Gupta Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 5:42 AM
A wonderful pageantry of mighty beautiful words ... a vivid picture ....
Anish Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Very.very evocative. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lamoureux Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 5:20 PM
For me this is the best I have read so far for the contest. Hugs Rick.
Peranteau Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Hello my dear poetic friend... I'd be that deceiver if I was to tell you that I did not stop to look at that beautiful face before I ventured Beyond her eyne! Yesss Nette, to take notice of her wriggle from the inside out....yikes... awesome write my friend! Much love, james
Vaso Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Such a romantic sensual write, loved this!
White Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 10:58 AM
I love this. The imagery is spectacular. Beautiful Nette
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