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If you have seen her face and not the soul then you have never known anything at all... pines, orchids, fireflies light the June nights yet they sleep when dark morning bows its barren crown: and there in slumber, are their eyes awake to see the glory behind the mist? Lines, curves of a woman we behold as summer blooms, but it is in winter when her naked heart blazes until the tiny lamplights of her body weep, giggle, and invigorate. The rage and silence of her inner lenses, these do you not discover? She opens the gates of her moans for walls to expose her supple pearls, this child- maiden rippling between waves and unclothed seeds, unbidden… If these you cannot grasp, then you will never behold her bare splendor. -------- Naked Contest of Anthony Slausen 11/14/16

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Date: 11/21/2016 6:21:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem and so true. It's magic. Thank-you.
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Date: 11/18/2016 9:48:00 AM
Brilliant writing well done on your win!
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Date: 11/17/2016 7:12:00 PM
wonderful win, Nette. Congrats to you.
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Date: 11/17/2016 8:10:00 AM
Superb write as always my dear friend, Nette! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! Many hugs and cheers! love lots, Lory
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Date: 11/17/2016 4:33:00 AM
Delightful. Congrats on a deserved win.
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Date: 11/16/2016 11:58:00 PM
I love the beautiful sensuous poem you wrote, and the picture goes so well with it. Congratulations :)
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Date: 11/16/2016 9:24:00 PM
Lovely imagery, nette. Congratulations on your trophy win. You deserve it. Blessings, Janis.
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Date: 11/16/2016 2:43:00 PM
Nette oh such a beautiful write CONGRATULATIONS on First Place in the contest,.
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Date: 11/16/2016 2:00:00 PM
Lovely poem, Nette! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 11/16/2016 1:26:00 PM
Wow!!! magnificent poem, Nette, I love the vibrant colors of the image you have paint... Congratulations on your podium win..... Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/16/2016 11:04:00 AM
congratulations my poetic friend a verse of pure understanding about the female spirit and smack down of the male grasp of its content over their limited view
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Date: 11/16/2016 10:48:00 AM
Excellent write. Congrats on a well deserved win! :-)
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Date: 11/16/2016 10:11:00 AM
It seems I was right in my assessment. Hugs and. O grate on your top placement!
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Date: 11/14/2016 5:42:00 AM
A wonderful pageantry of mighty beautiful words ... a vivid picture ....
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Date: 11/13/2016 8:03:00 PM
Very.very evocative. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/13/2016 5:20:00 PM
For me this is the best I have read so far for the contest. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 11/13/2016 5:07:00 PM
Hello my dear poetic friend... I'd be that deceiver if I was to tell you that I did not stop to look at that beautiful face before I ventured Beyond her eyne! Yesss Nette, to take notice of her wriggle from the inside out....yikes... awesome write my friend! Much love, james
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Date: 11/13/2016 11:06:00 AM
Such a romantic sensual write, loved this!
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Date: 11/13/2016 10:58:00 AM
I love this. The imagery is spectacular. Beautiful Nette
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