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Naked Ballerina

. Under the cool Summer’s rain fluttering as if a dryad’s pixie ‘mongst the Oak and fern cooling from the heat and beaming me eve’s ballet turned tremulous ‘pon mine me

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/17/2015 11:26:00 AM

These eyes of mine are filled with an enchanting imaginative scene.You re so good at portraying images through words.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/14/2015 8:57:00 AM

You had me at the tile, it was a most delicious imagiining.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/12/2015 3:25:00 PM

Your poem reminded me of the movie Eve's Bayou, A 1997 movie. Love the rain, thank you for reading my Sin City poem. I wrote it after seeing a commercial on TV. Have a good day :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/9/2015 9:08:00 PM

I've read this one a while back before... very interesting...Perfect word choice... you've got the fascinating imagery and the most titillating words to describe such crazy moments. It's fun to fantasize on your meaning. Always, Laura

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/27/2015 5:22:00 PM

Lovely visual on this gem of a poem James. love phyl

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/27/2015 3:30:00 PM

I too, love the visual here, love your poetry James..so classical.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/22/2015 5:20:00 PM

A great penned here, love it..........A.M.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/22/2015 3:23:00 PM

truly visual, james... you painted this really well... huggs

Daver Austin

Date: 7/22/2015 3:04:00 PM

Coming 'pon such a scene mine knees get weak. Love it. Love, daver

Constance La France

Date: 7/22/2015 7:56:00 AM

James, a dreamy, magical write, a fluttering 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, I had to get low ....yes it's a true story that happened to me when I was young and knew everything and my parents knew nothing in my opinion, and they never asked me why but just took their lost little bird back into the nest. I heard recently that George died of cancer , after all he did to me my heart still hurt ...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/22/2015 12:02:00 AM

weeeee.. love the first line but the whole picture is so magical.. =')~Olive ELoisa

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/21/2015 8:19:00 AM

Very good poetic quality work..Not sure who the ballerina might have been?..Sara

Skat A

Date: 7/20/2015 10:01:00 PM

hello James, wow, I'd do the same if I was a Pixie.... No looking!!! LOL........ LOVE SKAT