Just James Poet Free verse

Naked

in the truth; silence
we see, each other!

naked and alone

I see your love light bright
I see depth to your soul
I see your burning past
I see your woman want
I see your every need

there is no pretense

just you, and still,
you are all I want!

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Charlotte Puddifoot March 22, 2017 at 5:11 PM title pulled me in lol maybe you should write naked and free more often...:) Just James March 28, 2017 at 11:55 PM Thanks for the visit Charlotte; electronic design engineer by day so structure is my life...but there is hope for me ..:)

Jean Murray March 19, 2017 at 5:18 PM So sensual and raw. Beautiful. Just James March 20, 2017 at 11:20 AM Tx Jean

Carol B. March 15, 2017 at 8:46 AM Beautifully expressed! Just James March 15, 2017 at 11:09 AM Thank you very much Carol

White Wolf March 15, 2017 at 1:09 AM So much convey in so few words! Stripped down to the bare essentials! You have found your essence, well done, James. Just James March 15, 2017 at 2:53 AM Thank you very much WW..it really is a naked poem..:)