Naked

There once was a lonely young girl Who lived in her own little world When she felt morose She took off her clothes And said,"I'll give naked a whirl". 11/10/2016 For contest Naked

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Paloma P

Date: 11/16/2016 10:09:00 PM

I assume her clothes whilst she stripped down her soul, naked can be utterly freeing. Good luck Larry, this has great dimension & complexity.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/16/2016 10:14:00 PM

Thanks..it got a N/A but it was fun anyway.

Agony Aiane

Date: 11/10/2016 11:31:00 PM

my heart can't take this. tell me, how long did you laugh? let's compare.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/11/2016 1:31:00 PM

I have to admit, I chuckled at my own stuff on this one. Thanks for the comment..you're very kind...Larry

Christy Stover

Date: 11/10/2016 10:08:00 PM

I love it! At first glance it seems to be a cute funny poem but there is great depth to it and an intense emotion.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/10/2016 10:11:00 PM

Thanks so much, Christy!!..Larry