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Larry Bradfield

Naked

There once was a lonely young girl
Who lived in her own little world
When she felt morose
She took off her clothes
And said,"I'll give naked a whirl".

11/10/2016
For contest Naked

Copyright © Larry Bradfield | Year Posted 2016

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November 16, 2016 at 10:09 PM

I assume her clothes whilst she stripped down her soul, naked can be utterly freeing. Good luck Larry, this has great dimension & complexity.

Larry Bradfield

November 16, 2016 at 10:14 PM

Thanks..it got a N/A but it was fun anyway.

November 10, 2016 at 11:31 PM

my heart can't take this. tell me, how long did you laugh? let's compare.

Larry Bradfield

November 11, 2016 at 1:31 PM

I have to admit, I chuckled at my own stuff on this one. Thanks for the comment..you're very kind...Larry

November 10, 2016 at 10:08 PM

I love it! At first glance it seems to be a cute funny poem but there is great depth to it and an intense emotion.

Larry Bradfield

November 10, 2016 at 10:11 PM

Thanks so much, Christy!!..Larry

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