Naked

My blood trickles
through the tip of my pen
as my soul is exposed
yet once again.

Naked, my words
slowly open the door,
and step into the world
largely ignored.

Fearfully, they
confront giants of hate,
bigotry, ignorance,
Thus fixing their fate.

So bleeding, I
press my pen to the page
and bear my soul once more
to cowards’ rage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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J.T. Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 11:49 AM
Awesome poem; -JT
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 7:58 PM
Hatred is an acid that destroys the vessel holding it.
Imtiaz Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 2:48 PM
yes it burns like the fire burns the wood
A   Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 7:27 PM
Rachel, you sure spilled this one out perfectly... I also love the powerful ending you express...Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 6:48 PM
A very tasteful way to expose yourself. I enjoyed your poem.
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