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Image result for pictures of diver jumping from cliff into the sea Collum Lune a type of Haiku

naked

naked diver dives
into awesome azure blue sea....
sharks open jaws

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sara Etgen-Baker

July 31, 2026 at 3:33 PM

yikes!😂

Sara Kendrick

August 1, 2026 at 6:08 AM

Sara B., I feel the same. Sara K.

Andrea Dietrich

July 21, 2026 at 11:19 PM

Yikes!

Sara Kendrick

July 22, 2026 at 4:40 AM

That what I am talking about, Andrea. Whoa!! Thanks Sara K.

Karen Croft

July 18, 2026 at 7:18 PM

That's taking a bite out of things! Cool read!

Kim Rodrigues

July 17, 2026 at 7:15 PM

Vivid imagery, Sara!

Sara Kendrick

July 18, 2026 at 4:15 AM

Thank you, Kim. I wouldn't want to be him. Sara K.

Joanna Daniel

July 16, 2026 at 10:46 PM

Great imagery, Sara:)

Sara Kendrick

July 17, 2026 at 5:14 AM

Thank you, Joanna. Maybe a warning to someone. Sara K.

Hiya Sharma

July 16, 2026 at 10:29 AM

Gosh that's tragic! Diving frivolously but there the phantom shark awaits .. very mysterious and suspenseful like a silent warning. Brilliantly inked haiku, dear Sara.. stirred my soul! Sending you love and light always ~

Sara Kendrick

July 16, 2026 at 2:40 PM

Sharma, there are always sharks there, but we swim or play in the ocean not worried about it. It just happens that some people get bitten and manage to survive or some not so lucky don't . The best place to protect from anything that bites or stings in the ocean or sea is on the shore or beach. I like you nice comments. Thank you very much. Sara K.