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Poetry/Rhyme/Naive Faith
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Written, August 12, 2025
For the International Contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol. 54 (#4 Naive Faith)
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 09/05/2025

Third Place 

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In my early years I possessed this naive faith,
and I believed all that the Bible saith:
        often to a fault,
it came from a place of innocent faith;
           my life was simplistic with trust.

By fourteen I stopped expecting people to be kind,
I thought that I would find those of like mind:
        but found liars,
yet, my naive remains and I seek out and find;
            good people who believe in me.

And as an adult my naive quality is not weakness,
it is my source of strength and my uniqueness:
         I question everything,
I ask for evidence- gone is all my meekness;
           and I expect others to keep their promises.

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Date: 9/8/2025 1:18:00 AM
Love your reflections here. Congratulations and thanks for the inspiration and my win in your last contest
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Date: 9/8/2025 2:04:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, blessings Constance
Date: 9/7/2025 9:02:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this wonderful, intimate write, Constance:-) I loved this. Nice format, too. Thanks for always sharing pieces of your soul.
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Date: 9/8/2025 2:05:00 PM
Edward, thank you for the contest and my wonderful placement and for the congratulations and compliment, blessings
Date: 8/13/2025 12:10:00 PM
A write with much empathy Constance, it got me Considering on what others think..' To be fair I have thought similar yet..Fluidity is in all Situations i find.' It is the soil for growth.'
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Date: 8/14/2025 3:36:00 PM
Joe, thank you for the compliment and comment, appreciate, Constance
Date: 8/13/2025 9:49:00 AM
Personal experience is the best teacher. But I still find the bible as the best teacher.
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Date: 8/14/2025 3:37:00 PM
John, thank you for the comment, the bible is important for sure, Constance
Date: 8/13/2025 6:01:00 AM
Very enjoyed read! Very nice write in my view!
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Date: 8/14/2025 3:38:00 PM
AA, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance
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