Poet Destroyer A Poet Couplet

Mytopia

~MyTOPIA~
 
A sip of tea in my Magic Cup.
A fancy bowl for my little pup.
Faraway from a world corrupt.
I found reason and meaning to reconstruct.
 
By day I live under the perfect sun.
I relive a life where unhappiness~ is undone.
From the time I opened this door my life slowly begun.
I unlocked the purpose that unites us* all as one*
 
By night I isolate my dreams in my log cabin. 
A pillow case made of, worry free feeling of satin.
My harmony keeps me from thoughts so devil-in.
My moon shines in the river with beautiful waves of medieval Latin. 
 
My island based entirely on reason, of insanity hassle.
A sweet paradise entwined by the meshed flower tassel.
My own fantasy surrounded by a flawless pharrell castle.
Governed by my own golden state temple Utopian idea vassal.
 
by;p.d.

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 11:02 PM if only **SKAT**

Maurice Yvonne September 23, 2014 at 12:07 AM Wow! Really good Linda.

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 30, 2014 at 7:01 PM a blend of two of my favorite words myopic and utopia. Actually, there are more words in there My, optical, I, pic, yO....a fine bit of poetry, Now write some new stuff! Your comments MELT ME!

Harry Horsman January 25, 2013 at 8:25 AM as one such as myself gets in to your poetry, one feels one is getting into your head,,, i really do understand how men fall in love with you,, Nathan is a very lucky guy, if your poetry reflects at all on your life,, i know it is special to me what i read,, what i'm saying i just love your poetry,,,,

Jon A Cavanaugh December 5, 2012 at 3:51 AM Not short sighted at all. What beautiful vision! I wish I had dreams like that. But, this is your fantasy that you have allowed us to glimpse at and enjoy vicariously. Well done!

Justin Bordner October 30, 2012 at 12:43 PM When we figure out how the world is ours then we can share it with others divinely - you definitely do not suffer from myopia PD. - good word manipulation - J.A.B. %

Debbie Guzzi October 9, 2011 at 7:59 PM wow PD that's on cool imagination! Light & Love

Don Johnson July 17, 2011 at 5:15 PM To dream, then live, perhaps forgive, be there in thy castle, to be at one, under the sun, when thoughts n deeds, don't hassle. xo, Don

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 7, 2011 at 10:50 PM somebody's been a-missing here, too-- oh sighs...so where are you hiding, pd??? hope you pop up again ;)

Brashard Bursey July 5, 2011 at 11:06 PM Great poem. And I want to enter one of my poems in your contest.

Eddie Merritt July 2, 2011 at 3:10 PM That was uffing Awsome

Elizabeth Wesley June 29, 2011 at 12:22 PM Clever write, a dreamland island we all would like to find. Thanks for your visit, love it when you come.

Shannon Deane June 16, 2011 at 3:14 PM I love how your words flow off the page, beauty captured on paper

Black Eyed Susan June 13, 2011 at 6:41 AM Sounds wonderful... :)

Dinda Minardi June 1, 2011 at 7:51 AM I want to live in Mytopia :)

Constance La France May 31, 2011 at 7:49 PM Many beautiful words and lines within this poem, my dear PD, making it just lovely to read. and I want to thank you from the depths of my soul for the placement of my poem, Dads Work Shed, in your contest, you have no idea how much that poem means to me, thank you, thank you, thank you ~~

Matthew Anish May 30, 2011 at 8:59 AM This is a fine dream - like poem. One question - what does the word pharrel mean? Yours Matthew Anish

Robert A. Dufresne May 30, 2011 at 5:20 AM Don't tell anymore people about this fantasy island, PD ! Everybody will start trying to move in and for sure that'll blow the whole deal! Like the style here. You really have a gift for the pen , PD

Helen Forber May 27, 2011 at 4:45 PM p.d. Thank you for your comment on my latest poem, I’m glad you enjoyed it and that I can return the sentiments on the poem I just read written by you. I look forward to reading many more; I like your sense of style and interpretation- on this poem especially. But will no doubt find reason to compliment you on many more. All the best, Helen x

Don Johnson May 26, 2011 at 3:36 PM Lovely sounds are ushered in, and thoughts are gathered, thick or thin . A lovely thoughtful verse no sin. Remember all the good times babe, and happy be ye in ye made:) love Don

John Aaron Green May 26, 2011 at 5:19 AM very creative and interesting,,,it was a great joy to read your work, thanks for sharing...

The Situation May 25, 2011 at 3:57 PM the month of april brought healing to me and my mind. it seem so magical that i should be reading this by you. you who i have prayed for. sometimes i think about what you said to me; "I prayed for you"those words i'll never forget.

Renee Kelly May 24, 2011 at 9:39 AM Love this! Making me think of my-own-topia :D

Kevin Semeniuk May 23, 2011 at 9:42 PM Magical! this is a great poem! I think you have such great range in your writing!

Sarah Seraphin May 22, 2011 at 9:45 PM * “Hi * Beautiful & Lovely & Sweeet * Beautiful LeeAnn. * Your Amazingly Gifted Light * Asked Myself to Let Your Beauty Know As Unto When * I Finished Yesterdays Posted Poe * Tis Done * I Hope You Like It * As I Also Hope That Your Beauty Is Doing Wonderfully * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * With Lips of Luv * Sarah” *

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