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Mythology of Fire

In the beginning thus Prometheus who loved mankind Stealing fire from the Gods of Mt Olympus Then to Earth he did resign Man marveled at fire’s glowing light Finding comfort from its warmth at night Rocks which surrounded the campfire pit Melted their metals into the ashy spit Man’s observant brilliant idea dawned A forge a hammer a chisel and a spear Once ferocious King of the beast who roared death Learned to tremble with fear Bellows of goat skins did man blow across the red hot coals The white hot warmth thus saturated the metal into hammer and fold Pound the copper beat the tin- So man did master the fire therein Shields and weapons- tools and blades Due the love of Prometheus made friend We the man did gratefully accept To Prometheus we are in his debt And for his trouble did Zeus make plain To steal from a God is unforgivable and disdain

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Date: 2/7/2013 1:41:00 PM
I just love mythology and you have written a wonderful story here! Thanks for sharing it here. :) Tanya
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Date: 2/7/2013 11:12:00 AM
Mark, long time since I've visited your poems now. - I am glad that I chose yours today - thank you for this little "story" / poem, I like it! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/5/2013 6:50:00 PM
I enjoyed this story a lot. Thanks for the good lesson in Mythology.
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Date: 2/5/2013 1:14:00 PM
Love this write Mark I enjoy writing them and reading them and this is so good xx
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Date: 2/5/2013 9:34:00 AM
Wow !! Love this poem and the history lesson. It read so easily down the page and I couldn't stop once I started. To me a sign of good writing and keeping the readers interest. I like how it built up in suspense too. Much enjoyed the read. Will look at more.
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Mark Goodson
Date: 2/5/2013 12:27:00 PM
Debra, You are such a precious jewel in reading and remarking about my poetry today. I do appreciate you for all that you do. Thanks- you've made my day!

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