Mythology - the Gods Must Be Crazy Premiere Contest Winner

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Gods of mythology from long ago,
commanded humans act within their law
or else there might be punishment, and so
man worshiped, followed, never to withdraw.

These gods ruled over sun, moon, rain, and wind;
and humans prayed to them for harmony.
Now in our world, they would be quite chagrined
by skies so full of our technology.

Our airplanes, jets, and rockets would incite,
and put them in a frenzy of despair
with terror in their skies both day and night,
and techno signals bouncing everywhere.

Apollo, Zeus, Poseidon, Jupiter
you would go crazy in these modern days.
The sun and sky and sea do now concur
your power has been lost to nature's ways.

No more your lightning and loud thunderclaps.
No more your floods from storms that you set free.
No more a drought to make the crops collapse.
No more the sinking of great ships at sea.

We have since learned about our universe;
that earth is reigned by scientific means.
New rules for skies and land and sea traverse;
No gods of mystery behind the scenes.

We now can travel land and sea, and oh,
the sky and outer space, our playground too.
Gods of mythology from long ago
you must be crazy since we've dismissed you.

Your paintings and stone statues all remain
and written history still stirs the mind.
Gods of mythology, it's clearly plain
you served a purpose to ancient mankind.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: YGGDRASIL ME
Sponsor: White Wolf
Judged: 05/20/2017

~2nd Place~
Contest: The Gods Must Be Crazy
Sponsor: John Lawless
Judged: 01/18/2016

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Date: 5/21/2017 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! The Gods of old, were indeed needed. Now sadly far too often, man thinks he is his own god! Loved reading his gem my friend!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/21/2017 6:24:00 PM
Thank you very much, for your nice comment and congrats, Robert. Glad you enjoyed it; it was a fun write for me. Sandra
Date: 5/21/2017 2:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your First Place win, Sandra. Clearly a lot of work went into this! Well done. Regards, John.
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Date: 5/20/2017 10:58:00 PM
Congratulations, Sandra, on your well-deserved win in the contest. I really enjoyed reading your poem.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/21/2017 6:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carole, for your congratulations and positive comments. Sandra
Date: 5/20/2017 10:56:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra on this win. A great poem! - Dean
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/21/2017 6:25:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dean! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 5/20/2017 7:51:00 PM
The techno gods have won!..Congrats on your win Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/21/2017 6:26:00 PM
Thank you once again, Joseph! Sandra
Date: 5/20/2017 7:37:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend...a Poseidon of a poem...god bless...^WW^
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/21/2017 6:26:00 PM
Thanks, ^WW^! I appreciate your supportive comment and congratulations! Sandra
Date: 5/20/2017 7:17:00 PM
Love the write, Sandra, perfect in everyway... congratulations on your awesome win ~*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/21/2017 6:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for the nice comment and congrats. It was a fun write for me! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/26/2016 10:24:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations - LINDA -
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:38:00 PM
This is a great poem, Sandra. It certainly is amazing comparing the gods from old to where we are now.
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Date: 1/20/2016 9:20:00 AM
Great poem, Sandra, Congratulations on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/20/2016 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph! Sandra
Date: 1/19/2016 11:24:00 PM
Well done, Sandra. Congratulations on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/20/2016 4:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Scott, for your visit and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 1/18/2016 9:04:00 PM
Wonderful win, Sandra.... hugs. SKAT
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/19/2016 7:59:00 AM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/18/2016 8:53:00 PM
Love it Sandra....style, form and a little bit of history's mysterys and science's compliances. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/19/2016 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, John, for liking my poem! I really enjoyed writing it for the contest, and I am so honored and pleased with the nice placement you have me. Thanks again, Sandra
Date: 1/9/2016 9:19:00 AM
I love where your imagination and talent travel. I appreciate you and your gifted pen very much; you both inspire and teach simply by showing up ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/11/2016 12:55:00 PM
Hi CayCay, thanks so much for your uplifting comments and support! I am humbled, and so much appreciate your kind remarks. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/4/2016 11:06:00 AM
Wow! excellent, now am sure this is good...great write Sarah
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/4/2016 10:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, White Sage. Glad you liked it. Sandra
Date: 1/3/2016 6:36:00 PM
Very good Sandra! good luck in the contest!!-luloo *smiles*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/4/2016 10:26:00 PM
Hi Laura Loo, thank you! Hugs, Sandra
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