Mystics Split Haikus


The soul speaks to you
instinct gliding on a riff
                              it
                                echoes your name love

Dearest heart whispers
gliding back and forth to your
                                       soul
                                             singing falsetto 

Strumming brittle leaves
flutter echoes of beads fall
                                   plop
                                         from passion flower

The night is youthful
we sing vibratos in sync
                               with
                                     our ignited flames

Climax of our song
rises high on cloud currents
                                    soar
                                          deep in crown of light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 6, 2016 at 9:46 PM
Angeline Haikutwinkle, Congratulations on your "MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKU win." ~LINDA~
Haikutwinkle Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:07 AM
Much Appreciated
Williams Gault Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Exquisite haiku, uniquely and creatively woven. Congratulations!
Haikutwinkle Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:08 AM
Thank you
A. Sharma Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:05 AM
Congrats on a worthy win with these superb haikus Angeline...
Haikutwinkle Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:08 AM
Thank you
Smith Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 7:51 PM
Congratulations, Angeline...
Haikutwinkle Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:08 AM
Thank you again
Allison Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 5:10 PM
absolutely beautiful haiku Angeline congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Haikutwinkle Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:09 AM
Thank you
La France Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Angel, these haikus are just lovely and I like your layout too, a wonderful 7 ~
Haikutwinkle Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Thanks for the encouragement
Smith Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:29 PM
Pretty deep youself Angeline, well done and best wishes in the contest, Charlie
Haikutwinkle Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Thank you
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