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Mystics Split Haikus


The soul speaks to you
instinct gliding on a riff
                              it
                                echoes your name love

Dearest heart whispers
gliding back and forth to your
                                       soul
                                             singing falsetto 

Strumming brittle leaves
flutter echoes of beads fall
                                   plop
                                         from passion flower

The night is youthful
we sing vibratos in sync
                               with
                                     our ignited flames

Climax of our song
rises high on cloud currents
                                    soar
                                          deep in crown of light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/6/2016 9:46:00 PM
Angeline Haikutwinkle, Congratulations on your "MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKU win." ~LINDA~
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 4/7/2016 2:07:00 AM
Much Appreciated
Date: 4/6/2016 8:26:00 AM
Exquisite haiku, uniquely and creatively woven. Congratulations!
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 4/7/2016 2:08:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 4/6/2016 2:05:00 AM
Congrats on a worthy win with these superb haikus Angeline...
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 4/7/2016 2:08:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 4/5/2016 7:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Angeline...
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 4/7/2016 2:08:00 AM
Thank you again
Date: 4/5/2016 5:10:00 PM
absolutely beautiful haiku Angeline congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 4/7/2016 2:09:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/28/2016 8:45:00 AM
Angel, these haikus are just lovely and I like your layout too, a wonderful 7 ~
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 4/4/2016 10:23:00 PM
Thanks for the encouragement
Date: 3/27/2016 8:29:00 PM
Pretty deep youself Angeline, well done and best wishes in the contest, Charlie
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 4/4/2016 10:23:00 PM
Thank you

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