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Mystical Vision

It was a temple of some sort with lots of non Christian faces and symbols There was an electric key board in the far left hand corner and a sacred Envoy in white at the front of this monumental space. Some lady robed in black came up to me and handed me a red ribbon covered in scribbles peoples names She told me it was the cross of Jesus and that I had to wear it on my right shoulder. So I lay it there and then started to pray I suddenly felt all the pain and merciful emotions Christ was feeling at the loss of all his people ; Preferentially loaded with sorrow, outnumbered by the mass, I knew that I was in the right place so I stayed until the end of the Sabbatical; It was only when I woke up that I realized that all the names etched on that silk red ribbon were names of people who had died. Where did I spend the night, how did I get there, Christ was visiting where ? it didn't matter, I just knew...

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Date: 12/3/2021 7:28:00 AM
Wow, some dream this is Vie, scary too. The poetry is excellent, especially when telling it as it was.
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Date: 12/3/2021 5:00:00 AM
There can be something very spiritual about dreams...Delice
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Date: 12/2/2021 9:07:00 AM
Dreams a mystery. Sometimes Gods presence.
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Date: 12/2/2021 2:47:00 PM
Yes I did feel his presence that night Eve, thank you for stopping by,
Date: 12/2/2021 9:00:00 AM
A special vision granted only to the pure of heart. Wonderful. Hugs.
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Date: 12/2/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Victor for loving me just as I am, :)
Date: 12/2/2021 6:34:00 AM
Only the special ones get such divine visits. Enlightenment in your vision my friend.
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Date: 12/2/2021 2:48:00 PM
Thank you dear Vijay for honoring me with your keen comment. You are reflecting your goodness onto me, take care
Date: 12/2/2021 5:00:00 AM
a truly mystical experience. Noetic, may be? Thanx so much for EMPATHY. shalom, shalom (More Love, Joy, Peace Patience, KINDNESS, gentleness, faithfulness, self-control are better than daggers. Galatians 5: 23)
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Date: 12/2/2021 2:47:00 PM
Dear Anil, dreams are a mystery at their best of times and worst of times, thanks for reading, and being here. :)
Date: 12/2/2021 3:20:00 AM
This reads like a mystery....Were you dreaming or were you visited by some extraterrestrial being or apparition or did you have a vision ?? This is quite intriguing and I feel being haunted ! You could bring in a very eerie feeling Rose~
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Date: 12/2/2021 2:46:00 PM
Dear Valsa it was intriguing to me too. Not sure where this dream came from it was 4:30 am, when I awoke, and couldn't go back to sleep, either way the part about Christ felt real.

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