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Mystical

Mystical love fragrance divine
Ours to imbibe, not seize
Seeking futile, simply align 
Unfreeze, the way we sneeze

Bliss current magnetic
Makes heart throbs ecstatic
Our joy goes ballistic 

Mythical
Mystical

17-September-2021
Quietus

''M'' Contest, New Poems Only - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Sam Kauffman Date: 9/24/2021 10:44:00 AM Love your "ballistic" joy Seeker. Your words bring us into a community "mythical" and "mystical" as we all relate to the beckoning "fragrance divine." So much said in this form. Every word has an impact. Blessings to you! Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/24/2021 7:21:00 PM Thank you, Sam! Your kind encouragement makes my heart sing!

Brian Sambourne Date: 9/22/2021 5:13:00 PM Superbly written in words creative + original. Poems short + searing that sidestep the constant "I" pronoun are true gems. Best wishes + congratulations. Brian Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/22/2021 6:24:00 PM Thanks Brian! Yes, in these days of short attention spans, the Quietus with barely 9 lines is compact, accompanied with a rhythm and refrain emphasis. Happy you liked this new form

Constance La France Date: 9/22/2021 2:39:00 PM Seeker, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this wonderful poem, splendid writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/22/2021 6:22:00 PM Delighted that you included this new form among your winners, Constance!

David Holmes Date: 9/21/2021 2:01:00 PM Dear Seeker - I really like the first line - "Mystical love fragrance divine" just wonderful - Congratulations David Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/21/2021 9:47:00 PM Thank you, David, happy you enjoyed!

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 9/20/2021 9:27:00 AM Dear Seeker, you chose the theme "mystical" and executed it very well in this beautiful write... Hearty congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/20/2021 7:29:00 PM Thank you, Anitha!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/19/2021 10:54:00 AM It's so cool to see your quietus form used in this contest. Have you asked for it to be included as a form here at Soup? I got only one of my four invented forms through, but I am pretty sure this one would be accepted. It's completely original! Congrats on your win with Mystical! Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/19/2021 7:36:00 PM I think new poetry forms are on hold. Once it opens up, I’ll submit the Quietus for consideration. In any case, I enjoy the format, for the moment!

Arturo Michael Date: 9/17/2021 1:31:00 PM Very lively and joyful write...into the mystic of love. Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/17/2021 7:48:00 PM Thanks Arturo! Give this Quietus form a try!

Joe Dimino Date: 9/17/2021 9:19:00 AM So beautiful! Love it. A shame, as you say, most of us thinking such things entirely mystical (out of worldly), and not forefront, readily available, yearning to be accepted for freely, immediately, effortlessly available to all -- with all else, the common everyday, agreed upon empirical of life, as illusion -- which it is. Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/17/2021 9:22:00 AM Happy it resonates, Joe! :)