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Within a land of Virgin Forest mystical wonders flourish Trembles the pulsing heart of heavenly laden body at night Ghostly figures shadows shoutout, dance, and nourish Soft weaving mellifluous emerald-mist awaiting daylight Chasms filled and mounds of decaying fallen trees below Eloquent lace lichen and mats of moss embrace nature's seasons Improbable flickering amber windows aglow Amongst high-tower contorted trees bestow reasons Verdure of mystical creatures lie low Beneath enclosing trees bough And susurration fluttering leaves As brownies are busy all night tweaking chores Alicorn, centaurs, fairies, and dwarf stir leaves of trees High overhead night creaks, cries, and laughter flow Sailing passage through moist earthy scent breeze Verdure of mystical creatures lie low euphoric Within a land of Virgin Forest 9/16/2021 ''M'' Contest, New Poems Only - Poetry Contest 6. Mystical Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/22/2021 2:30:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing, nice image ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/21/2021 1:58:00 PM
Eve - a wonderfully written, and mystical poem - congratulations, a well deserved win - David
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:37:00 AM
I love the imagery you have brought into your poem, in particular "As brownies are busy all night tweaking chores Alicorn, centaurs, fairies, and dwarf stir leaves of trees"
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Date: 9/20/2021 12:42:00 AM
Very mystical as well as a live description. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/19/2021 10:51:00 AM
You made all the phrases most mystical indeed, Eve. Loved how you inserted brownies into this. Nobody usually mentions them along with elves and fairies. You really wrote well on the topic. Enchanting!!
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Date: 9/19/2021 10:51:00 AM
Congrats too!!
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Date: 9/19/2021 9:38:00 AM
Mystical feelings. I would like to explore that forest!
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Date: 9/17/2021 7:34:00 AM
Darkly enchanting Eve. Best wishes in the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/17/2021 9:10:00 AM
Thank you, Chris. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/17/2021 1:31:00 AM
Fantastic fantasy. Loved it. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/17/2021 9:11:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Hugs Eve

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