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Mystical

Within a land of Virgin Forest mystical wonders flourish Trembles the pulsing heart of heavenly laden body at night Ghostly figures shadows shoutout, dance, and nourish Soft weaving mellifluous emerald-mist awaiting daylight Chasms filled and mounds of decaying fallen trees below Eloquent lace lichen and mats of moss embrace nature's seasons Improbable flickering amber windows aglow Amongst high-tower contorted trees bestow reasons Verdure of mystical creatures lie low Beneath enclosing trees bough And susurration fluttering leaves As brownies are busy all night tweaking chores Alicorn, centaurs, fairies, and dwarf stir leaves of trees High overhead night creaks, cries, and laughter flow Sailing passage through moist earthy scent breeze Verdure of mystical creatures lie low euphoric Within a land of Virgin Forest 9/16/2021 ''M'' Contest, New Poems Only - Poetry Contest 6. Mystical Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing, nice image ~ love and serenity _Constance
Holmes Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 1:58 PM
Eve - a wonderfully written, and mystical poem - congratulations, a well deserved win - David
Krutsinger Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 11:37 AM
I love the imagery you have brought into your poem, in particular "As brownies are busy all night tweaking chores Alicorn, centaurs, fairies, and dwarf stir leaves of trees"
Alex Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 12:42 AM
Very mystical as well as a live description. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 10:51 AM
You made all the phrases most mystical indeed, Eve. Loved how you inserted brownies into this. Nobody usually mentions them along with elves and fairies. You really wrote well on the topic. Enchanting!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Congrats too!!
Liguori Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Mystical feelings. I would like to explore that forest!
Green Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Darkly enchanting Eve. Best wishes in the contest.
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Thank you, Chris. Hugs Eve
Buhagiar Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 1:31 AM
Fantastic fantasy. Loved it. Best for a win. Hugs.
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Thank you, Victor. Hugs Eve
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