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Mystic Waters

Treacherous ebb tide Jagged barbs among the mist Step-stones to freedom Inspired by Raul's contest: "Ghost Tides"

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/21/2010 11:37:00 PM

Dear Carrie, Best of luck in the contest. Thank you for you comments. Love, Iolanda

David Byrne

Date: 2/21/2010 7:30:00 PM

well composed!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/21/2010 12:56:00 PM

How very nice and different. Thak you for your comments on Early March. Joyce

Constance La France

Date: 2/21/2010 12:20:00 PM

How utterly lovely, dreamy... perfect.. best of luck in the contest... Constnace

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/21/2010 11:42:00 AM

great write!!

Brian Strand

Date: 2/21/2010 8:13:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Carrie and congrats on your latest contest successes.Rgds Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2010 4:59:00 AM

Great view of the scene that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/20/2010 4:42:00 PM

Oh yes Carrie I see that. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol (PS soupy mail in about 5 minutes)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 4:19:00 PM

wow, now I gotta go see THIS picture. maybe one day Raul will make a haiku writer out of me yet. Good luck and thanks for your comments today andrea

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/20/2010 4:15:00 PM

Interesting Haiku! Carrie! Quite striking in imagery. Should do well on the contest. Good luck and best wishes always, Caroline.