Mystic Waters

Treacherous ebb tide

        Jagged barbs among the mist

                  Step-stones to freedom







Inspired by Raul's contest: "Ghost Tides"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Scripca Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 11:37 PM
Dear Carrie, Best of luck in the contest. Thank you for you comments. Love, Iolanda
Byrne Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 7:30 PM
well composed!
Johnson Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 12:56 PM
How very nice and different. Thak you for your comments on Early March. Joyce
La France Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 12:20 PM
How utterly lovely, dreamy... perfect.. best of luck in the contest... Constnace
Culverhouse Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 11:42 AM
great write!!
Strand Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 8:13 AM
Best wishes with this one Carrie and congrats on your latest contest successes.Rgds Brian
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 4:59 AM
Great view of the scene that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 4:42 PM
Oh yes Carrie I see that. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol (PS soupy mail in about 5 minutes)
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 4:19 PM
wow, now I gotta go see THIS picture. maybe one day Raul will make a haiku writer out of me yet. Good luck and thanks for your comments today andrea
Delacroix Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 4:15 PM
Interesting Haiku! Carrie! Quite striking in imagery. Should do well on the contest. Good luck and best wishes always, Caroline.
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