Mystic Walk

I took a mystic walk with you,
     a haze of violet, and sapphire blue

You reached out gently for my hand
    and I began to understand -

The universe, in all its glory
    only a part of life’s long story

So much more will we behold
    sparkling new, of ancient old.

You deeply looked into my eyes
    visions - memories- other lives

of you and I, your hand in mine,
    in love, but running out of time…

When I met you, remembrance was there
    but this lifetime won’t be so fair -

It seems the work we have to do
    must come before love burns anew.

But… 
     I still see you in my dreams,
           on twilight walks…. by crystal streams…

Promises of timeless love,
     as sure as stars that shine above.


Come… 
     take a mystic walk with me,
             in spirit dreams our love is free -


For in this place of timeless time…

        I am yours…

               and you are mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Atanacio Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Congrats on being featured they chose a terrific one
Gumbo Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 6:53 PM
I love this poem. Simply outstanding. Congratulations on being featured! Blessings! Susan.
Jordan Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 4:52 PM
Amy this poem expresses your love as well as your understanding of love so well - Outstanding well written poetry - I reckon I may as well add you to my favorite poets list because I just loved the beauty with which this poem was penned - Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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February 10, 2009 at 4:48 PM
Oh Amy, I'm so glad I didn't miss this one..(somehow I almost did!)....what a lovely write! Congratulations...well deserving to be featured this week...it is beautiful. ~ love, Carrie
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February 10, 2009 at 3:52 PM
wow!great poem of love Amy! congrats on it being featured this week!...Maryam
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February 10, 2009 at 2:25 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week, Amy! "a haze of violet, and sapphire blue", one couldn't wish for more beautiful colours to take this "mystic walk". Wishing you and yours the best! Mikki
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February 10, 2009 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Newton Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 9:25 AM
I do agree..very deserving to be featured...congrats! thanks for sharing
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations Amy, on your love poem, "Mystic Walk" being featured. Vince
Curcio Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Quite lovely and quite deserving of a feature on the homepage.
P. Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 12:26 AM
Beautiful write! Simple words with a lot of importance! ~ Arany
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February 9, 2009 at 12:23 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Amy.rgds Brian
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February 8, 2009 at 8:36 PM
Amy, congratulations on being featured this week with this beautiful poem. Love, Robin
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February 8, 2009 at 4:38 PM
Nice flow in this poem. Sounds like a wonderful place to be in your life. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Ali Avatar
February 8, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Fantastic poem.Congratulations for the feature!Keep up the great job!
Parish Avatar
February 8, 2009 at 9:57 AM
Absolutely beautiful.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 6:12 PM
Fabulous write. It has a serenity to it. God Bless. Vince
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