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Mystic Walk

I took a mystic walk with you, a haze of violet, and sapphire blue You reached out gently for my hand and I began to understand - The universe, in all its glory only a part of life’s long story So much more will we behold sparkling new, of ancient old. You deeply looked into my eyes visions - memories- other lives of you and I, your hand in mine, in love, but running out of time… When I met you, remembrance was there but this lifetime won’t be so fair - It seems the work we have to do must come before love burns anew. But… I still see you in my dreams, on twilight walks…. by crystal streams… Promises of timeless love, as sure as stars that shine above. Come… take a mystic walk with me, in spirit dreams our love is free - For in this place of timeless time… I am yours… and you are mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/13/2009 12:30:00 PM
Congrats on being featured they chose a terrific one
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:53:00 PM
I love this poem. Simply outstanding. Congratulations on being featured! Blessings! Susan.
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:52:00 PM
Amy this poem expresses your love as well as your understanding of love so well - Outstanding well written poetry - I reckon I may as well add you to my favorite poets list because I just loved the beauty with which this poem was penned - Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:48:00 PM
Oh Amy, I'm so glad I didn't miss this one..(somehow I almost did!)....what a lovely write! Congratulations...well deserving to be featured this week...it is beautiful. ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 2/10/2009 3:52:00 PM
wow!great poem of love Amy! congrats on it being featured this week!...Maryam
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Date: 2/10/2009 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week, Amy! "a haze of violet, and sapphire blue", one couldn't wish for more beautiful colours to take this "mystic walk". Wishing you and yours the best! Mikki
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Date: 2/10/2009 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2009 9:25:00 AM
I do agree..very deserving to be featured...congrats! thanks for sharing
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Date: 2/10/2009 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations Amy, on your love poem, "Mystic Walk" being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/9/2009 9:35:00 AM
Quite lovely and quite deserving of a feature on the homepage.
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Date: 2/9/2009 12:26:00 AM
Beautiful write! Simple words with a lot of importance! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/9/2009 12:23:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Amy.rgds Brian
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Date: 2/8/2009 8:36:00 PM
Amy, congratulations on being featured this week with this beautiful poem. Love, Robin
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Date: 2/8/2009 4:38:00 PM
Nice flow in this poem. Sounds like a wonderful place to be in your life. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/8/2009 11:29:00 AM
Fantastic poem.Congratulations for the feature!Keep up the great job!
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Date: 2/8/2009 9:57:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful.
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Date: 11/25/2008 6:12:00 PM
Fabulous write. It has a serenity to it. God Bless. Vince
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