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Mystic Mars

Mystic Mars





    great galactic ghoul
red magnetic umb mushrooms
    the masculine mars....





Written July 7th,2015
For contest "Subject Mars" by Joe Maverick

Copyright © Dr. Upma A. Sharma | Year Posted 2015

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Earl Schumacker

July 27, 2015 at 10:36 AM

Hi Dr. Sharma, I think of your haiku as haiku were meant to be; very concise, deep, meaningful and with a strong message. I rarely rate poems. This clearly gets a 7. I rated it accordingly. Congratulations on a great win. This was very entertaining, very creative. Have a great day. Earl

July 27, 2015 at 12:12 AM

Nice to see a Haiku making an appearance on the theme, Dr Upma, well done. Viv x

July 26, 2015 at 5:10 PM

DR UPMA Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**

July 26, 2015 at 12:44 PM

very creative Dr Sharma - love the clever alliteration - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

July 26, 2015 at 11:17 AM

Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

July 26, 2015 at 10:20 AM

Nicely done Dr Upma...Congrats on your win

July 11, 2015 at 3:41 PM

This one struck a seven with me. I say you'll win!! Keep writing great poems Dr Upma. Ken

July 9, 2015 at 2:34 AM

creatively written in a unique style.. this is WOW!!!! good luck in the contest, Dr. Sharma :))

July 8, 2015 at 9:13 AM

Oh...interesting and unique way you did this, Dr. Upma. I like it!

Shadow Hamilton

July 7, 2015 at 7:47 PM

great haiku Dr Upma gl in contest hugs

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2015 at 3:44 PM

Great M alliteration going on!! good luck in the contest.

Constance La France

July 7, 2015 at 2:19 PM

Upma, awesome for the contest and thanks for visiting my poems, God's love ... and O, the murmurring and drunken moon

July 7, 2015 at 2:18 PM

well crafted piece on mars, dr upma.. i like the ghoul part.. huggs

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