Mystic Love

Love speaks of hazy lochs,
stealing dreams
languishing your smile.

Mistaken silhouette vanishes,
dissolves into dusky cloak.
Apparitional insanity attractive,
everything consumed – soulful -
a heavenly trance.

Our gentle embrace ignites as we touch
and amber flame cruelly bakes us,
as hint of monster disappears, un traced
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Wordslinger Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Nice, I wonder where he went to, :)
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April 3, 2009 at 12:34 AM
A love poem in which 'Nessie' makes an appearance!! It heightens the 'mystical' effect... Well done Anna-Marie! Best wishes, Keith (PS you gotta be Scottish!)
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