Mystery of the Universe

The moon pours through my window
Shedding light unstained
Yet reveals so many things also
It's magic left unfeigned

The stars are often hidden
Relaxed behind the clouds
To some they are forbidden
Covert they remain enshrouds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Callus Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Unravelling mysteries of the universe are beyond me, Angela:) I'd rather just look, observe and enjoy what I see. ~ Regards // paul
Crabtree Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 9:01 AM
Thank you, Paul. It is beautiful to look at :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 3:14 AM
A quatrain is difficult to pull off. This pranced across the page prettily.
Crabtree Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Caren. I thought I would give it a try ;)
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 5:09 AM
It's magic to gaze at the mysteries of the universe--so well depicted, Angela!
Crabtree Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Thank you, Vijay. The moon has always intrigued me :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 11:05 PM
Superb imagery. The moon is always a winner. A lovely scene you depict. ~~
Crabtree Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Thank you, Victor. I love the moonlight :)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 5:31 PM
I am thankful for moonlight, I look better in muted light *lol*. I enjoyed your poem.
Crabtree Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 8:42 AM
lol...thank you Richard for reading :)
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