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Mystery of the Universe

The moon pours through my window Shedding light unstained Yet reveals so many things also It's magic left unfeigned The stars are often hidden Relaxed behind the clouds To some they are forbidden Covert they remain enshrouds

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/7/2020 2:55:00 PM

Unravelling mysteries of the universe are beyond me, Angela:) I'd rather just look, observe and enjoy what I see. ~ Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/9/2020 9:01:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. It is beautiful to look at :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/15/2020 3:14:00 AM

A quatrain is difficult to pull off. This pranced across the page prettily.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/15/2020 8:55:00 AM

Thanks Caren. I thought I would give it a try ;)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/14/2020 5:09:00 AM

It's magic to gaze at the mysteries of the universe--so well depicted, Angela!

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/14/2020 8:44:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. The moon has always intrigued me :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/13/2020 11:05:00 PM

Superb imagery. The moon is always a winner. A lovely scene you depict. ~~

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/14/2020 8:43:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. I love the moonlight :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/13/2020 5:31:00 PM

I am thankful for moonlight, I look better in muted light *lol*. I enjoyed your poem.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/14/2020 8:42:00 AM

lol...thank you Richard for reading :)