Mystery of the Shoe

Mystery of the Shoe 

Dad, I love my old brown shoes with their lace-up strings.
They feel good, and they should
For I wear them everywhere.

You remember them. I’m sure you do.
They have five eyelets on each side,
You always remind me to keep them tied.

Dad, I have a question about these old shoes—
One string always works short.
How does this happen? It was okay yesterday. 

It makes me work it back again,
Pull slack from top to bottom and up the other side.
No one seems to know what causes this. Do you?
Perhaps it will always be the mystery of the shoe.

Note-- This always happened to me as a kid, and now as an adult it still occurs. 
Does anyone have the answer?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/20/2011 1:57:00 PM
velcro is the answer, oh thats not what you meant is it, another cute one James, much enjoyed
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Date: 1/10/2011 6:36:00 PM
wow, James,, i had fun reading your poem.. wish i had the answer,..p.d.
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Date: 1/10/2011 9:51:00 AM
LOL I wish I DID have the answer, James. But you can remedy the problem by wearing shoes that don't tie. The problem you describe always happens when I'm lacing up my ice skates -- and this could be the reason I stopped wearing sneakers! Very funny poem! Love, Carolyn
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