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Mystery lover

in the green, green garden, under the blue, blue sky, did you throw me a rose on the sly? on the slow slow river, in the wooden log boat, did you sneak in for me a love note? in the loud, loud thunder, of stormy, stormy night, did you send me signal, with flash light? during hot hot coffee, in the greek restaurant, was it you who left a gold pendant? in my deep, deep slumber, I dream and think of you, wish you would just tell me “I love you!” 6th place John Lawless sponsored Just Thinking ..... contest Written 26/12/2020 Sapphic stanza modified to 6,6,6 3 syllables

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Date: 1/5/2021 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations Krish. Enjoyed reading. Nice repetition,any lover could use this. Enjoy your day. Heard Full lockdown and lots of cases. Take care. God bless you. Rama
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/5/2021 10:19:00 PM
Thanks Rama! happy you like it! I have had my two shots of Pfizer vaccine so feel safe. still wearing full PPE.
Date: 1/5/2021 4:33:00 PM
the repetition added to the lovers dance and longing to be acknowledged. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/5/2021 10:21:00 PM
Thanks John! greatly appreciate your generous placement. great contest. pleased to be part of it!