Mystery Girl

Our eyes meet, and the temperature is rising When we're standing so near, there's no disguising I don't know what to say, your a princess, I am clay Yeah, opposites attract, I'm not even denying You've got ahold on me, without even trying This boy begins to pray, light up my life today Sure you've got it all, but not so good at hiding Feel the chemistry, just let go and stop fighting I'm not going away, you body language says stay I'm the oxygen in the air, your longing to be breathing I see your smile, but in your heart there's a needing Night explodes into day, when love can have its way Hey sweet mystery girl, your beautiful face I'm reading I think it's so very clear, your defenses I'm defeating This dreamer's wish today, be free and fly away.. To me! ~Lyric Man Note: They are opposites and she's so mysterious, but one thing this guy knows is chemistry.. and they have it! This upbeat pop lyric is about two racing hearts.. One we all see and another only he can catch.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/23/2018 10:46:00 PM

G'day Lyric Man … yep, opposites do attract each other possibly to find out what makes them different. Certainly the feel of a bouncy song - Lindsay

Rosina Quigley

Date: 6/26/2018 12:27:00 PM

Aw so sweet beautiful words

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/23/2018 9:36:00 AM

None can surpass your pen when composing lyric poetry/songs. I found and married my mystery girl fourteen years ago my friend, has been a blessing every day since. A fav is this uplifting gem...

Stephanie Warrillow

Date: 6/12/2018 5:20:00 AM

That would make a great song

Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:18:00 PM

Thank you, it was written as a song actually.

Maria Williams

Date: 6/12/2018 12:02:00 AM

I think Carole said it exactly like I would have lol. Seriously though, I was always accused of being aloof and mysterious, when I was only being shy. Great lyric Chance, truly enjoyed....Maria

Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:19:00 PM

Oh, stay mysterious.. it's incredibly attractive!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/10/2018 8:25:00 PM

Oh, I'd love to hear this as a song, Chance. Sometimes when men think women are being mysterious, they are really just a bit shy. Glad that doesn't stop you from pursuit. An invigorating, romantic write! Hugs, Carolyn

Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:24:00 PM

Call it what you will but I love it.. thank you for your kind words!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2018 6:10:00 PM

very cool lyrics!! Upbeat and positive. Romantic! I like this a lot, Chance, and thanks for your sweet comment on my poem.

Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:25:00 PM

Wow.. humbled by your generous words!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2018 1:34:00 PM

- Beautiful romantic moment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:23:00 PM

You make me smile.. a lot :) Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/9/2018 3:16:00 AM

Well written piece Chance. Are you a musician?. Tom

Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:27:00 PM

Actually I am :)

Carole Duet

Date: 6/9/2018 1:25:00 AM

Oh yeah...I hear your music. Sing to me. lol

Donna Ahsinger

Date: 6/8/2018 10:02:00 PM

Great lyric Chance, it would make a good song....good write....Donna

Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:28:00 PM

Happy thoughts!!!

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/8/2018 7:03:00 PM

Nice...I like it...It has rhythm and flow...All the best Chance Summer

Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:30:00 PM

You are more than kind!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/8/2018 5:17:00 PM

Another fabulous lyric Chance, i especially love 'I'm the oxygen in the air, your longing to be breathing I see your smile, but in your heart there's a needing'. would love to hear this set to music, I'd love to hear it if its ever recorded!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lyric Man
Date: 6/12/2018 10:31:00 PM

Or maybe in person.. hey, a guy can dream ;)