Mystery Forest

Whispers though the trees,
Woodland hymns are hummed aloud:
Secrets of the trees.





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For Raul's Solace of Nature Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 24, 2012 at 10:27 PM
Dear Elizabeth,You are a Haiku Princess. I miss YOU Hope all is well with YOU and YOURS With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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December 24, 2011 at 6:42 AM
Dear Elizabeth, YOU have perfected the Haiku Superb Write I miss YOU May YOU have a Very Merry Christmas and a Happy, Healthy, and Prosperous New Year With LOVE ALWAYS And FOREVER, YOUR Liege... HG (Harry)
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May 31, 2011 at 9:18 AM
Dear Elizabeth, Its been a long time since YOU filled me with Inspiration I miss YOUR Talent in Haiku Hope YOU come back SOON!! With LOVE YOUR Liege...HG
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February 6, 2010 at 9:29 PM
Dear Elizabeth, I LOVE Exceptional Haiku such as this YOUR TALENT Outshines the Sun this is a SUPERB PEN My Prayers are with YOU and YOURS as I have not Heard from YOU in a Long while I Hope all is Well Write and just say HI! LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG
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December 23, 2009 at 3:29 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Elizabeth and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 9:33 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 1:55 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Elizabeth! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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December 20, 2009 at 11:47 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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December 8, 2009 at 5:06 PM
Dear Elizabeth, I hope YOU are feeling Well It's been a while since I commented SORRY I am still Waiting to read more of YOUR Superb POETRY LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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October 27, 2009 at 5:30 AM
Dear Elizabeth,You weave such beauty in YOUR Work YOU grip the reader so they want and need More of YOUR POETIC Talent and Knowledge I enjoy reading YOU LOVE ALWAYS ...HG Elizabeth YOU don't have A Soup Mail Envelope How can I write a letter to YOU I read Karen O'leary's comment On YOUR POEM "Summer" YOU are related to Raul One can see the Family Artistry between the two of YOU I look forward to Reading more of YOU soon GOT YOUR PEN READY? LOVE ALWAYS... HG
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October 24, 2009 at 2:52 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a beautiful view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
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October 23, 2009 at 10:19 AM
Lovely Haiku, Elizabeth. Thank you for sharing your lovely poetry this week. Lainie
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October 19, 2009 at 2:15 PM
Congratulations to you Elizabeth on your poem being featured this week You've finally gained the recognition that you probably didn't seek If you're like me you wrote your poem because your heart had something to say You thanked us for reading by writing good words, accept thanks in return today
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October 19, 2009 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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October 18, 2009 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Elizabeth. Love, Carol
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September 15, 2009 at 10:41 AM
great job with this write Liz keep the work coming! good luck in the contest!
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September 15, 2009 at 9:29 AM
Beautiful Elizabeth. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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September 14, 2009 at 5:07 PM
Thanks for your support...Raul
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September 14, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Nice use of alliteration and imagery in this poem. I like the feel of this piece. Good luck in the contest. I think you have a winner here. Karen
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September 14, 2009 at 4:20 PM
I can hear the whispers as the wind gently floats by. God speed in the contest. Keep writing. Sara
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