Patricia Cresswell Poet Free verse

Mystery

you walked away in anger
though there were blessings
upon your lips.
she took the blessings 
and thanked you, 
for they were well thought out 
too sting and lash
a stranger but instead she 
found you out and even 
though you would hate it,
if you only knew, she still reads 
words that make her wonder
who the heck are you?

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Jannie Breedt September 18, 2017 at 12:03 AM Wow this is a loaded poem. There ia so much here that one reads between the lines. Questions burning. Then there is your skill ,your craft. ... what must I say.

Russell Sivey September 17, 2017 at 5:01 AM Wow, what an ingenious write my friend! I surely loved reading your delightful poem here this morning! You have enlightened me by your masterful poem! Like you said, this poem was "well thought out!" Great Work!!

Pipping Stars September 16, 2017 at 12:48 PM your a lunitic... Patricia Cresswell September 16, 2017 at 2:44 PM Probably the jury is out on that one.

Patricia Cresswell September 16, 2017 at 10:45 AM Yeppers then you let your guard down and plop. lol I am a silly old bat. Thank you.

Ralph Sergi September 16, 2017 at 7:10 AM Well thought out, Pat! Love is a mystery because it never behaves the way you want it ti. Patricia Cresswell September 16, 2017 at 10:41 AM Still a mystery to me as well friendship. Oh well in the end I guess it is how good a friend or love was I that will have to be answered for at the final accounting. Thank you Ralph.

John Fleming September 16, 2017 at 5:40 AM Its meaning is as clear as spring water the way I read it; this is an excellent little poem! Your poetry is always good reading, Patricia...I intend to keep on visiting. All the very best - cheers! :) john Patricia Cresswell September 16, 2017 at 10:38 AM You are welcome at anytime. I hope my poetry is worthy of your visits. Thank you.