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you walked away in anger though there were blessings upon your lips. she took the blessings and thanked you, for they were well thought out too sting and lash a stranger but instead she found you out and even though you would hate it, if you only knew, she still reads words that make her wonder who the heck are you?

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Date: 9/18/2017 12:03:00 AM
Wow this is a loaded poem. There ia so much here that one reads between the lines. Questions burning. Then there is your skill ,your craft. ... what must I say.
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:01:00 AM
Wow, what an ingenious write my friend! I surely loved reading your delightful poem here this morning! You have enlightened me by your masterful poem! Like you said, this poem was "well thought out!" Great Work!!
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Date: 9/16/2017 12:48:00 PM
your a lunitic...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/16/2017 2:44:00 PM
Probably the jury is out on that one.
Date: 9/16/2017 10:45:00 AM
Yeppers then you let your guard down and plop. lol I am a silly old bat. Thank you.
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Date: 9/16/2017 10:23:00 AM
Hi Patricia , great write , you think you know somebody ,, ::)))) hugs
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:10:00 AM
Well thought out, Pat! Love is a mystery because it never behaves the way you want it ti.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/16/2017 10:41:00 AM
Still a mystery to me as well friendship. Oh well in the end I guess it is how good a friend or love was I that will have to be answered for at the final accounting. Thank you Ralph.
Date: 9/16/2017 5:40:00 AM
Its meaning is as clear as spring water the way I read it; this is an excellent little poem! Your poetry is always good reading, Patricia...I intend to keep on visiting. All the very best - cheers! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/16/2017 10:38:00 AM
You are welcome at anytime. I hope my poetry is worthy of your visits. Thank you.

Book: Shattered Sighs