Teddy Kimathi Poet Narrative

Mysterious Train

Sally was deep asleep on her study table at twelve midnight. The air
was very quiet in the dark outside the house. "Chooo" "Chooo" Choooo".....
a sound suddenly almost made Sally to fall from her chair! Her eyes almost
got out of their sockets, when she stared at a train right before her!
At its front it looked like the inside of a clock. "Hey, little girl! Get into the train
and visit the fruit world - a world where fruits eat, talk, and dance!
Curiosity got hold of her, making her to jump out of her bedroom window.
She wore pajamas, matching with bunny sleeping sandals.
"Can I see you?" Sally asked.
"Who?" came the reply.
"Anyone who is driving this train."
"There is no one in the train. Just the two of us outside."
Sally almost fainted with shock when she realized she was talking with a train!

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Constance La France July 29, 2015 at 10:49 AM Teddy, this is outstanding for the contest, a fantastic 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, 1 breathed his name a thousand times Teddy Kimathi July 30, 2015 at 9:49 AM You are very much welcome Broken Wings! Your works are awesome! ;-) Thank you for praising my work! *^_^*

Jan Allison July 28, 2015 at 1:06 PM super fantasy write Abdul - it sounds like a magical mysterious world:-) hugs Jan xx Teddy Kimathi July 30, 2015 at 9:42 AM Lol. It's alright Jan. Well, have a lovely evening. Jan Allison July 30, 2015 at 4:30 AM oops sorry Teddy - I am a bird brain - forgive me:-( hugs jan xx Teddy Kimathi July 29, 2015 at 10:16 AM Thanks Jan. You are such a great source of morale for me. Thank you very much! *^_^* Only that I'm not Abdul,lol.