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Mysterious Storm

Mysterious Storm

Sun and rain merge
Mysterious
Wild downpour
Waves send up mists
Raindrops born

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Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2025 at 12:59 PM

Sam, I enjoyed reading your post. The weather has been choice topic all the year of 2024 and continues into 2025. Sara K

Heidi Sands

January 11, 2025 at 6:32 AM

Great one. Raindrops born. I like that :)

Zyrool Gifford

January 6, 2025 at 12:38 PM

Nicely penned, Sam. Have a great new week ahead, my friend.

Paige Hind

January 5, 2025 at 7:50 PM

Hmmm, it looks like you did your tanka differently. Beautiful work! <3

Paula Goldsmith

January 5, 2025 at 7:56 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful storm write. We need rain. Please send some. A great write for the picture. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/week writing away.....................

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 5, 2025 at 6:13 AM

- "Wild downpour" ... sounds better than a heavy snowstorm (like we have) ... snow chaos was born, Sam :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman

January 9, 2025 at 9:55 AM

Hi Anne-Lise! Happy New Year! While ours is the season of rain (fingers crossed) yours is definitely the season of snow! Love how you describe it as "snow chaos!" Thank you for your delightful feedback! Sending you WARM wishes and blessings for the new year. Hugs!

Deb M

January 4, 2025 at 1:53 PM

Oh l like this Sam….just lovely especially the last line….Raindrops born! Debx

Sam Kauffman

January 4, 2025 at 8:06 PM

Hi Deb! Thank you so much. The prompt picture was so dynamic and graphic it was fun to interpret it. So glad you enjoyed the rainstorm. Happy New Year! Here's to a poetic new year.

Mysterious Storm

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