Mysterious Storm

Mysterious Storm Sun and rain merge Mysterious Wild downpour Waves send up mists Raindrops born

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2025 12:59:00 PM

Sam, I enjoyed reading your post. The weather has been choice topic all the year of 2024 and continues into 2025. Sara K

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/11/2025 6:32:00 AM

Great one. Raindrops born. I like that :)

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 1/6/2025 12:38:00 PM

Nicely penned, Sam. Have a great new week ahead, my friend.

Paige Hind

Date: 1/5/2025 7:50:00 PM

Hmmm, it looks like you did your tanka differently. Beautiful work! <3

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/5/2025 7:56:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful storm write. We need rain. Please send some. A great write for the picture. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/week writing away.....................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2025 6:13:00 AM

- "Wild downpour" ... sounds better than a heavy snowstorm (like we have) ... snow chaos was born, Sam :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/9/2025 9:55:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise! Happy New Year! While ours is the season of rain (fingers crossed) yours is definitely the season of snow! Love how you describe it as "snow chaos!" Thank you for your delightful feedback! Sending you WARM wishes and blessings for the new year. Hugs!

Deb M

Date: 1/4/2025 1:53:00 PM

Oh l like this Sam….just lovely especially the last line….Raindrops born! Debx

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/4/2025 8:06:00 PM

Hi Deb! Thank you so much. The prompt picture was so dynamic and graphic it was fun to interpret it. So glad you enjoyed the rainstorm. Happy New Year! Here's to a poetic new year.