Mysterious Smile
no one saw her invisible pain
wrapped in her mysterious smile,
no one listened to her silence
in the crowd with deaf ears,
no one cared about her story
that she whispered,
no one imagined her drowning
in the tides of depression,
though she died struggling in
deep sea waters, but she suffered
in life even before she drowned,
now she no more holds sorrows
inside her broken heart,
she walks freely in the invisible
world as all her sufferings settled
underneath the deep sea, leaving a mystery.
Mystery - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron
July 6, 2016.
# I put the two pictures together, at the beginning I wrote about the last picture 'she was drowning but nobody saw her struggle'. I used drowning in two ways...drowning in depression and actually drowning in the sea and then I concluded with the second picture 'being invisible'....in the invisible world after death.
April 28, 2016.
Being invisible #2 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: SKAT A
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