Mysterious Night

Stars are scattered amid bluish hues
Darker clouds are peering through 
Moon is lost in the stormy night
A distant skyline appears in sight.

Couples frolicking on the evening deck
Flaunting jewelry and elegant dress
Flirting and romance in the air
Posing for pictures everywhere.
 
Dining room's buzzing, the ship's cruising 
Singing, toasting, boasting, sipping 
Enjoying a lobster dinner tonight 
The desert line up will soon delight.

Dancing, drinking peaked in overdrive 
Calm sets in sensing positive vibes
Until the Coast Guard arrives
And search begins as someone dies.

She went overboard from the tenth deck
"Must have jumped" the husband says
No one's buying his sorry story
The captain believes to the contrary.

The ship's cameras did not capture 
What took place no one knows for sure
The gossip ends on ship's arrival 
Mysterious night awaits next departure.

August 3, 2017
Mysterious Night--Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 7:21 AM
As I read the first couple stanzas I thought this would be about the Titanic, but there is tragedy just the same, Very nicely penned Vijay
George Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 7:00 AM
You have allowed the romantic atmosphere turn into a tragedy so mysterious. No one must have probably anticipated such an ending . So many doubts arise in the minds of the readers.... is it an accident, a suicide or a murder? Great penning!
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Ahhh, yes, this is most definitely worth an investigation, this kind of fishy mystery! I had to look hard for it, but I found this interesting poem of yours farther back in your collection!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 5:40 AM
Oh, boy ... romance and murder, what an odd couple for sure. Cool dark noir poem, Vijay. What an inventive mind you have. The imagery and the surprise all works well w/this most enjoyable read. Excellent poetry. Love and joy always.
Ashley Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 9:13 PM
A very intriguing mysterious write Vijay... Well-written with a sad ending... enjoyed!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Starts out joyous as was my sister's cruise...then ends with tragedy. Great job!
Pandit Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:47 PM
Thanks Kim---very happy to read your comments.
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