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Mysterious Breezes and Winds

Mysterious Breezes and Winds Consider the breezes and how they blow Organdy curtains across a lover’s bed; The brush of air conditioning on a working head; A chiffon dress fluttering with the breeze of ballroom dancers, The whispering kind keeping insects afloat. And blowing pages of a book one by one. A wind rattling windows Before a cool summer rain. What is the soft breeze that pleases you? Breezes of the sea on a bather’s nap. The wave and rhythm in summer trees. Consider wind and breezes where they go.

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Date: 6/19/2017 10:31:00 AM
I could feel a soft breeze in my face as I read, Sunlite. I'm hoping we have a breeze today.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/21/2017 6:29:00 PM
I hope you have one - we don't - it's so humid and still! Thank you for commenting on my "pome"
Date: 6/19/2017 9:05:00 AM
Wow, this is absolutely beautiful my friend. Very comforting and soothing are your words today. So wonderfully expressed, I am in awe of this piece.
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Date: 6/21/2017 6:28:00 PM
Such kind words, Chris! Thank you.
Date: 6/18/2017 8:00:00 PM
It's amazing what wonderful visions the wind can provide though it can only be seen as it moves objects around. It does indeed feel like a mystery and you have expressed that so beautifully in this poem Sunlite! : )
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Date: 6/21/2017 6:26:00 PM
Oh, for a Hawaii breeze today, Connie! Thank you.
Date: 6/18/2017 7:22:00 PM
Sunlite, this is so true! The different kinds of breezes. I pay attention to the different things from the breezes on my walks and here at home both. Your poem is so nice. I love it. I would like to keep it as a fav. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 6/21/2017 6:23:00 PM
I would like to have some today, Heidi!
Date: 6/18/2017 7:07:00 PM
Lovely, makes me say "Ahhh," Sunlite! Janice
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/21/2017 6:22:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!!

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