Sunlite Wanter Poet Verse

Mysterious Breezes and Winds

Mysterious Breezes and Winds

Consider the breezes and how they blow
Organdy curtains across a lover’s bed;
The brush of air conditioning on a working head;
A chiffon dress fluttering with the breeze of ballroom dancers,
The whispering kind keeping insects afloat.
And blowing pages of a book one by one.

A wind rattling windows 
Before a cool summer rain.

What is the soft breeze that pleases you?
Breezes of the sea on a bather’s nap.
The wave and rhythm in summer trees.
Consider wind and breezes where they go.

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Daniel Turner June 19, 2017 at 10:31 AM I could feel a soft breeze in my face as I read, Sunlite. I'm hoping we have a breeze today. Sunlite Wanter June 21, 2017 at 6:29 PM I hope you have one - we don't - it's so humid and still! Thank you for commenting on my "pome"

Chris Green June 19, 2017 at 9:05 AM Wow, this is absolutely beautiful my friend. Very comforting and soothing are your words today. So wonderfully expressed, I am in awe of this piece. Sunlite Wanter June 21, 2017 at 6:28 PM Such kind words, Chris! Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong June 18, 2017 at 8:00 PM It's amazing what wonderful visions the wind can provide though it can only be seen as it moves objects around. It does indeed feel like a mystery and you have expressed that so beautifully in this poem Sunlite! : ) Sunlite Wanter June 21, 2017 at 6:26 PM Oh, for a Hawaii breeze today, Connie! Thank you.

Heidi Sands June 18, 2017 at 7:22 PM Sunlite, this is so true! The different kinds of breezes. I pay attention to the different things from the breezes on my walks and here at home both. Your poem is so nice. I love it. I would like to keep it as a fav. Thanks for sharing :) Sunlite Wanter June 21, 2017 at 6:23 PM I would like to have some today, Heidi!

Janice Canerdy June 18, 2017 at 7:07 PM Lovely, makes me say "Ahhh," Sunlite! Janice Sunlite Wanter June 21, 2017 at 6:22 PM Thank you, Janice!!