Mysterious

Mysterious,
he was
with much
to give, 
The proof
change
is possible 
while torment
and tradgidies 
show their 
negative face, 
That's our reality 
as we spin 
through space 
experiencing 
a common plain,
All these words
giving perception
to our experience
spiraling 
and colliding 
inside our head,
Spirit, the soul and our intellect, 
Detecting Ancient Wise Knowledge,
Consciousness communicating
through thought
having much to say,
Discovering Art, 
Hand gesture, 
Symbols 
and numerical digits,
Information legit?
A generation 
with knowledge 
at our finger tips 
but most 
don't choose 
this path, 
Wasted time by design 
manufactured from concepts
concieved from 
cause 
and effect,
Study this 
and have it become 
part of your being,
Also used by evil 
bringing negative 
interactions 
so be aware,
Come up 
with new ideas,
Positive with
productive growth
the imagination
is a funny thing...

Quincy Mac
Date Written: 20.1.2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/8/2017 11:33:00 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it! A-7 to be sure! I am always intrigued by the "mysterious!" - deep and very powerful piece! Keep these coming, my friend! All the best Pandita
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