Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Myself In Your Eyes

Reflection of me
in your beautiful blue eyes
clearer than mirror,
a mirror may lie to me
but your eyes always speak truth.

Sometimes crystal clear
reflection of glacial lake
holding the blue sky
I become a bird in it
fly with the wings of your smile.

Sometimes I am blurred
by the tear drops of your eyes
I can't see myself,
those teardrops clean me again
another flight in  clear sky.




© kash poet
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Placement: 8th;(Nov. 2012)

Contest:The Refelection Contest

Sponsor: Michael J Falotico

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Debbie Guzzi November 15, 2012 at 2:39 PM Oh I love how you ended very good Kash! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown November 14, 2012 at 7:48 AM Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Reflections" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Bukang Liwayway November 12, 2012 at 5:59 AM Congratulations on you win my friend Kash...it's an awesome poem. cheers!!! Love, Maria

Len Gasun November 12, 2012 at 12:01 AM Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Kash! hugs, Leonora

Joyce Johnson November 11, 2012 at 6:33 PM Lovely poem kash. It speaks for itself. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Skat A November 11, 2012 at 5:14 PM love your win~SKAT~

Olusegun Arowolo November 11, 2012 at 12:10 PM Wonderful piece with nice images,Kash..Congratulations on your superb win...

Bl Devnath November 11, 2012 at 4:31 AM Wonderful picture of thoughts of love, artistic expression. Congrats my friend on your win. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A November 10, 2012 at 6:30 PM Kash, congrats with your wonderful win...pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 10, 2012 at 6:26 PM MANY CONGRATS KASH ON A WONDROUS WRITE AND WIN .. WAY TO GO FOR REFLECTIONS LUV..

Joseph May November 10, 2012 at 6:17 PM congrats on a great win Kash

Richard Lamoureux November 10, 2012 at 8:24 AM Way to go kash I liked this poem right away.

Michael J. Falotico November 10, 2012 at 8:01 AM Congrats on your win in my Reflection contest... Michael

Richard Lamoureux November 9, 2012 at 1:44 PM I really like this one Kash, I feel the same way when I look into the eyes of my wife.

Abraham Elizondo November 3, 2012 at 6:20 PM I really enjoy your style. I can only aspire to write this well some day..

Nette Onclaud November 2, 2012 at 2:01 PM oh so mellow, kashi.. the eyes mirror the soul and thoight.. go and win it!..:) huggs Nette Onclaud November 2, 2012 at 2:02 PM THOUGHTS

Gwendolen Song November 1, 2012 at 8:15 AM Painting a perspective of your true love's eyes in such an elegant way...fav lines of mine in this breath taking tanka--I become a bird in it..fly with the wings of your smile! Outstanding write, Kash! Glad I got to read this one! oh, and thanks for stopping by! gwendolen

Gwendolen Song November 1, 2012 at 8:15 AM 7 :)

Rachel St.Cross November 1, 2012 at 8:12 AM ‡ Wiping Away Her Tears With A Kiss Tracing The Soft Tips, Of Her Beautiful Lips, My Dear Precious Kashie. Sooo Beautiful And Thank You For Kind Sweet Visit. Love, Rachel *

Andrea Dietrich October 31, 2012 at 2:56 PM wow, Kash, another sensitive and romantic poem. Love it. The eyes have it!!!

Ravi Sathasivam October 31, 2012 at 7:21 AM Excellent and well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

James Marshall Goff October 30, 2012 at 6:34 PM I like it Kash!

Harry Horsman October 30, 2012 at 3:34 PM Wow Kash these are brilliant, enjoyed...

Nette Onclaud October 30, 2012 at 1:47 PM another flowing gem from you, kashi... really fluid in its pacing and imagery!... best wishes and wowie huggs!...:)

Russell Sivey October 30, 2012 at 9:24 AM This is a truly beautiful write, very beautiful write indeed my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and delightful poem this morning! What a powerful and reflective piece, I really enjoyed the "those teardrops clean me again" line, very special! What an awesome write, Great Work!!

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