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Myself In Your Eyes

Reflection of me in your beautiful blue eyes clearer than mirror, a mirror may lie to me but your eyes always speak truth. Sometimes crystal clear reflection of glacial lake holding the blue sky I become a bird in it fly with the wings of your smile. Sometimes I am blurred by the tear drops of your eyes I can't see myself, those teardrops clean me again another flight in clear sky. © kash poet =============000============= Placement: 8th;(Nov. 2012) Contest:The Refelection Contest Sponsor: Michael J Falotico =============000==============

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Date: 11/15/2012 2:39:00 PM
Oh I love how you ended very good Kash! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/14/2012 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Reflections" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2012 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on you win my friend Kash...it's an awesome poem. cheers!!! Love, Maria
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Date: 11/12/2012 12:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Kash! hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/11/2012 6:33:00 PM
Lovely poem kash. It speaks for itself. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/11/2012 5:14:00 PM
love your win~SKAT~
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Date: 11/11/2012 12:10:00 PM
Wonderful piece with nice images,Kash..Congratulations on your superb win...
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Date: 11/11/2012 4:31:00 AM
Wonderful picture of thoughts of love, artistic expression. Congrats my friend on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:30:00 PM
Kash, congrats with your wonderful win...pd
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:26:00 PM
MANY CONGRATS KASH ON A WONDROUS WRITE AND WIN .. WAY TO GO FOR REFLECTIONS LUV..
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:17:00 PM
congrats on a great win Kash
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Date: 11/10/2012 8:24:00 AM
Way to go kash I liked this poem right away.
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Date: 11/10/2012 8:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win in my Reflection contest... Michael
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Date: 11/9/2012 1:44:00 PM
I really like this one Kash, I feel the same way when I look into the eyes of my wife.
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Date: 11/3/2012 6:20:00 PM
I really enjoy your style. I can only aspire to write this well some day..
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Date: 11/2/2012 2:01:00 PM
oh so mellow, kashi.. the eyes mirror the soul and thoight.. go and win it!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/2/2012 2:02:00 PM
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Date: 11/1/2012 8:15:00 AM
Painting a perspective of your true love's eyes in such an elegant way...fav lines of mine in this breath taking tanka--I become a bird in it..fly with the wings of your smile! Outstanding write, Kash! Glad I got to read this one! oh, and thanks for stopping by! gwendolen
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Date: 11/1/2012 8:15:00 AM
7 :)
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Date: 11/1/2012 8:12:00 AM
‡ Wiping Away Her Tears With A Kiss Tracing The Soft Tips, Of Her Beautiful Lips, My Dear Precious Kashie. Sooo Beautiful And Thank You For Kind Sweet Visit. Love, Rachel *
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Date: 10/31/2012 2:56:00 PM
wow, Kash, another sensitive and romantic poem. Love it. The eyes have it!!!
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Date: 10/31/2012 7:21:00 AM
Excellent and well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 10/30/2012 6:34:00 PM
I like it Kash!
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Date: 10/30/2012 3:34:00 PM
Wow Kash these are brilliant, enjoyed...
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Date: 10/30/2012 1:47:00 PM
another flowing gem from you, kashi... really fluid in its pacing and imagery!... best wishes and wowie huggs!...:)
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Date: 10/30/2012 9:24:00 AM
This is a truly beautiful write, very beautiful write indeed my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and delightful poem this morning! What a powerful and reflective piece, I really enjoyed the "those teardrops clean me again" line, very special! What an awesome write, Great Work!!
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