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Myopic (An Acrostic)

Maybe Your understanding Ought to Penetrate beyond Icing and discover the Cake ****************** For Sami's facial feature (Eyes) contest

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Date: 5/17/2009 10:42:00 AM
Lordie, lordie, lordie!!! Girl you have gone deep with this one. This ought to be a Pulitzer! You went way down in the primal sea to pull this one out. Awesome Job! ~Joseph
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Date: 4/30/2009 10:03:00 PM
Sue, this is brilliantly and intellegently penned. Good luck. Erninlado
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Date: 4/29/2009 5:54:00 PM
acrostic taken to another level!
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Date: 4/29/2009 4:20:00 PM
Now that was clever. Nice comparison...understanding and cake. Good luck in the contest. Lovingly, Dane
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