My Writings Garments

>>1111>>MY WRITINGS GARMENTS<<1111<<

Wo! Unto the man who stands
And asserts that my writing intends,
To relate only commonplace things,
And secular narratives, 
It’s not even relative,
For if it were so,
You would want to know,
That in the present times,
Yeah I’m telling you this within a rhyme as I’m sitting,
Likewise a writing might be written as I’m living,
And given with more attractive narratives.

Now I’m sick of all the arguments,
The narratives of my writings are its garments,
Come on readers I want to hear your comments!
Cause he who thinks these garments are the writing itself,
Doesn’t have true wealth and needs some,
They need to run and deserve to perish because they are dumb,
And have no share in the world to come.

Wo! unto the fools who look no further when they see an elegant robe!
Stagnant, mentally unfit to find answers across the globe, dimwit! 
More valuable than the garment is the body which carries it,
Take note to the following, I recommend wisdom to everybody,
More valuable even than that is the soul which animates the body,
Cause fools only see the garments of my writings,
The more intelligent see the body, it’s more enticing,
Get with my writings, inviting anybody and all,
The wise see the soul, and take it personal,
And go on seeing its proper being, on a higher level,
In this current time we have been dealt,
The “Upper Soul” of my writings will stand revealed and felt. 

These words are not mine and don’t dwell as a belief system in my mind,
This allegorical narrative is knowledge intertwined,
With tricks and how to learn to be quick, 
Mentored by enlightened Semitic Jewish mystics,
You’re unintelligent, always quit, internally sick,
You’re wanting the mindset of being awake and conscious,
But you can’t reach what you’re after, its above you and afar,
Because you don’t have basic knowledge of the Zohar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/21/2015 1:03:00 PM
Fell free to express your writing garments, the knowledge you extend on this free verse, is far from anything I've read on this site. Perhaps one other poet on here writes with open conscious. Epic write my friend. Love LINDA
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Date: 11/21/2015 7:32:00 PM
Kia Ora Linda, I'm pleased you like this piece. It is influenced by knowledge I was taught through the hebrew alphabet, and within the original text of bere'shit, which is the first writings within the Torah of the Tanakh. Hmmmmm perhaps that one other poet on here that you are talking about is the unique person i'm replying to? Am I correct? :) Aroha, Quincy Mac
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