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My Worse Critic, Myself

many faces of me usually dont feel so low today i cant see feelings so below mirror my enemy i know better i see the worse in me it kills the good i weather whats the point why even try the negatives joint its blurring site like a ugly duckling insecure feelings immature sprinkling this day is killing me doesnt matter whats said i see what i see better off left in bed my inner self misery kill the image that scars my inner being awaken me my God end me

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Date: 8/13/2011 2:05:00 AM
wheeew i say the same things everyday i ask him to take me sometimes and end me 7up
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Date: 3/17/2011 6:03:00 AM
Ouch...a very emotional write, Jennifer. We all have our lessons to learn here on earth. I don't think that "God end me" would be the right avenue to look for? Love yourself first, and thank God for what he's given you. This will help you to glow, then shine for others. Wishing you the best! Mikki
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