My Worse Critic, Myself

many faces of me
usually dont feel so low
today i cant see
feelings so below

mirror my enemy
i know better
i see the worse in me
it kills the good i weather

whats the point
why even try
the negatives joint
its blurring site

like a ugly duckling
insecure feelings
immature sprinkling
this day is killing me

doesnt matter whats said
i see what i see
better off left in bed
my inner self misery

kill the image
that scars my inner being
awaken me
my God end me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Castro Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 2:05 AM
wheeew i say the same things everyday i ask him to take me sometimes and end me 7up
Mac Donald Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 6:03 AM
Ouch...a very emotional write, Jennifer. We all have our lessons to learn here on earth. I don't think that "God end me" would be the right avenue to look for? Love yourself first, and thank God for what he's given you. This will help you to glow, then shine for others. Wishing you the best! Mikki
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