My World Without You, My Poesy

When you are with no companion
and no one can read your very silence

When you are brimmed with joy
and you find no sign of warmth

When your solitude is lonely
and you cease to feel the wonder

When no single wave in the air
and you have a longing to breathe

When your heart denies its throbs
and your tone becomes still and cold

When none can hear the drops of your wounds
and you can't even swallow your sighs

When the night has no stars in his sky
and no dream dares showing a face

When no other alluring path to walk
and no thirst to reach satiating founts

When both, mind and heart share your pen
and no single paper in your den

How couldn't there be a life
that would save lives!

How can I envision my world
without you, my poesy!
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George Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 1:14 AM
Poetry is your life breath ! Mine too.... Poetry came to me by chance and not by choice. But now how I bury my loneliness, and my pain in poetry..... How I exult in poetry in my in my leisure. For a born poet like you with a golden tongue and an innate flair for language, how much more you feel its power and woo it than I do. Besma, I feel and take to heart every line you have penned and fully concur with all your thoughts.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 2:30 AM
And that's the chemistry of our bonding! I feel a great genuine beauty when I read your poetry, Valsa.. You are of remarkable humility, Valsa! Your wonderful poetry flows through the soul and marks both the mind and heart of an avid reader.. Your poetry displays who you are.. what you think and where you ascend.. Thank you so much for always being here with the grace and beauty of your words.. your kindness and generosity and your great support! God bless you. Love and hugs.
Bordner Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 10:12 PM
I love the death touch of this poem Poetess...To suffer with grace...there's a visceral virtue in your style...J.A.B.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 2:13 AM
Blessed with percetive soul that reads my humble thoughts.. thank you so much, Justin, for feeling my words! A delight reading your rewarding feedback! Regards and blessings.
Ashley Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 9:16 PM
A splendid poem to behold, my sweet soul sister. Poetry is your very lifeblood. It is your life force, the spirit that animates what expands your intellect and dwells in your soul. It is the soulful expression that flows freely from the tip of your talented and artistic pen to the overflowing joy of your avid readers, who cherish your precious gift that you so lovingly share. Thank you, Besma, for the beauty you bestow on us, I am ever inspired by your wondrous gift. Warmest wishes, love and hugs always.. ~Susan
Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 12:57 PM
Wow! Dearest Susan, what a stunning feedback from a pure loving heart that drips of poetry nectar! Having you, dear soul sister, as an ardent reader elevates and beautifies my poetry! I'm blessed to share my passion and humble words with inspiring gifted souls! Thank you so much, sweet Susan, for so beautiful words on my humble soul and work! Deeply touched and grateful.. Blessings. Love and hugs.
Callus Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 10:47 AM
You and poetry were born to live side by side, Besma. One can't live without the other. May your muse stay forever faithful to you....otherwise it would be not just your loss, but also ours! Warm regards & Blessings // paul
Riabi Dziri Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 8:59 AM
I am the one amazed by your adeptness in seeing through words.. in reading the writer's feels.. and in outshining the work of Art itself! I learn to give due respect to every work of worth from such a wonderful, elevating and elating feedback, Paul! Your poetry and your comments are of great value! You honour my humble poem.. thank you so much. Best regards and blessings.
Lindley Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 11:35 AM
As always your beautiful verses sing very deeply to this old poet's heart and soul. A fav-- an inspiring piece....
Riabi Dziri Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 12:00 PM
So humbled by so kind and a rewarding feedback from a great poet of remarkable humility! Thank you so much, Robert! Your support and encouragement are highly appreciated. My deepest regards and blessings to you.
Proxenos Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 11:04 AM
You my dear soul sister will never be without your poesy for your destiny and talent is the art of your writing the most wonderful and awesome poetry. Your spirit and soul sing poetry evident in your every write. Be blessed my dear friend, Hugs Jennifer.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:28 AM
Blessed be my sweet Jenny! Your kindness and generosity of inestimable value to me! A reader of receptive heart and a poetess of adept pen and beautiful mind as you are, you inspire and bring a lot of delight and beauty in my soul.. thank you so much for your sincere words and support, soul sister.. Love and hugs.
Nicole Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 9:55 PM
Without Words, poetry would only exist in moments of the wind. Then again, gathering all emotions together in one place. Might be challenging. So thankful that we have pen and paper, a way to capture our words. Moments of the heart and soul. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Hugs and Blessings to you. ~ Brandy
Riabi Dziri Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 3:26 AM
Sweet Brandy, you have captured the beauty of poetry in your tender heart and eloquent mind.. a great pleasure reading your wonderful thoughts! Thank you so much for being here to add joy to my soul! Love and hugs. Warmest wishes and blessings.
Vangaveti Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 7:45 AM
Oh very well said!! I cannot imagine my life without poetry!! It has been my saviour for years now!! Great write Besma!!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 1:27 PM
Swetha, I'm happy for you poetry has been healing your soul and saving you.. thank you so much for being here to read and appreciate my humble work.. Best regards and blessings.
Somadas Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Fantastic flow of words with a melancholy touch... Thanks for sharing...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 1:21 PM
My honour and pleasure, Jenish.. I highly appreciate your visit and appreciative comment.. thank you so much! Deepest regards and blessings.
Salehi Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 1:40 AM
I enjoyed your poetry/ poesy/ writing and the messages within. Excellent ...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 1:16 PM
So happy you enjoyed the read, Pashang.. thank you so much for your visit and praising feedback! Best regards and blessings.
One Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 2:19 PM
This would have been perfect for my recent poem about there being no poetry.. you describe the angst very well.. we would be lost without poetry.. a gem of a poem..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 1:57 AM
The poem came to me raising her words.. I want to show gratitude to Poetry! Thank you so much, Silent One, for the rewarding feedback! My gratitude for your support and encouragement.. my deepest regards and blessings.
Williams Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 1:23 AM
How perfectly you have described life without poetry Besma. Yes indeed the wonder of words reside in our Souls waiting to be shared to the rest of the world. It is hard to imagine a world without flowing flowery language. This Gem is a fave for me dearest Soul....Maria Hugs
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 1:23 AM
My heart has whispered its words and tone.. and I wanted to share my sentiments of deep gratitude for such a blessing! Dearest Maria, your kind words and wonderful feedback is of great value to me.. thank you so much for your beauty and generosity.. my warmest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Krampe Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 7:05 AM
This, exactly. Enjoyed your poem, Besma.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 3:12 PM
A pleasure to see you, Agnes! Happy you enjoyed my poem! Thank you so much! Regards and blessings.
Michael Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 1:17 PM
It's a cool evening lullaby...All in the Poesy of Love....Nice one Besma
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 3:31 PM
My pleasure, Arturo! Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment! So humbled by your generosity and honoured by your visit. My deepest regards and blessings.
Pandit Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Those who love poetry, it is hard to imagine life without--as you say, Besma. You illustrated in many ways our hearts and lives are intertwined in verses poetry evokes--much enjoyed the tone and flow.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 3:27 PM
Always an immense pleasure to receive your uplifting feedback, dear Vijay.. and very glad you enjoyed the read.. so rewarding are your kind and appreciative words on my humble work! Thank you so much for the honour of your visit.. my deepest regards and blessings.
Cunningham Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 10:11 AM
It would be a very.lonely world indeed Besma, we cannot survive and enjoy life alone. Well written. Hope you're well. Tom
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Thank God for His blessings.. I so much value your visit, Tom, and your beautiful feedback! Thank you so much for your sincere support! Have a great time with Poetry! Best regards and blessings.
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