My World Is Blue Without You

surreal my days
endless my nights
i wait for you
and time keeps floating on by
totally unaware of me



AP: 2nd place 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Daniel Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 8:59 PM
A poignant little poem, Line:)
Gauthier Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 3:08 PM
Thank you, Jo ~
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 1:01 PM
yes, it must feel that way for you, Line. but I know you are an industrious woman and hopefully you are enjoying the Xmas season.
Gauthier Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 6:37 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~ indeed trying to keep busy and out of trouble.
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