My Workshop

Time to clean my shop, Work will never stop. Tools need to be put away. Sawdust needs sweeping, Cobwebs are creeping, My soul is in disarray. A pair of pliers, Some speaker wires Hang them up on the pegboard. A set of drill bits, Is giving me fits, Problems can not be ignored. If I’m feeling lost, It’s too high a cost, So cleanliness I’ll extol. Then son of a pup I’ll build myself up, In my shop I’m in control. ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE By Tony Lane

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Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/7/2011 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the "ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE" poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud. CR

Shani Fassbender

Date: 9/6/2011 10:28:00 PM

Great job, Tony! Wish some of that would rub off on my husband and his garage...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2011 5:54:00 PM

Congratulations on the win, Tony

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Tony. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/6/2011 4:57:00 AM

congratulations Tony. A nice tidy read, good to get rid of the cobwebs. well done. Marg

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/6/2011 12:02:00 AM

Sounds like u had to give yourself a pep talk in this award-winning write! Just great poetry again, 'Tony. Congrats....Did u get the Lord's closet officially cleaned out? Gwendolen

John Freeman

Date: 9/5/2011 10:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your #2 Tony. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 5:40:00 PM

CONGRATS TONY ON SUPER SECOND PLACE WIN IN NETTE'S CONTEST LUV WITH DYNAMIC WORDS ..

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/5/2011 4:31:00 PM

whOOOsh,,,yeah! Great write, Tony, and congrats on the placement! ~N

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/5/2011 3:50:00 PM

Oh, if only you could rub off on my husband. :) Great poem. Lee

Jack Horne

Date: 9/5/2011 3:49:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Tony : )

David Williams

Date: 9/5/2011 3:16:00 PM

hey Tony congrats on your great win..David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/25/2011 6:04:00 PM

Good one..A very different approach to the topic..Reads like a winner to me..I think that it helps most men to go to the shop when they need release from stress...Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/25/2011 6:06:00 PM

My work on which you commented was from years ago and our daughter Doris got over the surgery has done well..I still need your prayers for other reasons..Sara

James Chenevert

Date: 8/24/2011 1:31:00 PM

Intersting perspective. Jim

Tony Lane

Date: 8/24/2011 6:39:00 AM

Good, that was the feeling that I was trying to convey. Sometimes I need to see something that I've accomplished even if it's sweeping a floor.

Aaron Crowley

Date: 8/24/2011 4:30:00 AM

Oh I love this. I feel the anxiety of the persona and that longing for control in one's life. I sense an allegorical undertone?