Sara Chansarkar Poet Monorhyme

My Wonder Mother

From the crack of dawn to hours of late
She worked tirelessly for her brood of eight
Sweaty and exhausted, waited till everyone ate
Then watered down the curry for her plate

Written on:04/17/2017
Contest: Form M Monorhyme by Broken Wings

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Eve Roper April 22, 2017 at 7:04 PM Nicely written , Sara, congratulations on your win. ~*

Constance La France April 20, 2017 at 2:25 PM CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this excellent Monorhyme. It touched my heart.

Roy Pett April 20, 2017 at 2:22 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Sara and tribute, a joy to read.

Charlie Smith April 19, 2017 at 11:02 AM But for a mothers love...congratulations Sara

Sushma A. Singh April 19, 2017 at 10:23 AM The last line says it all!! Lovely meaningful write. Congrats on topping the list!

Alexis Y. April 19, 2017 at 7:57 AM Hi Sara, I always appreciated and loved my mother. However, that love and appreciation got stronger when I became a mother too. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich April 18, 2017 at 5:52 PM oh my, I LOVE this one. The poor dear selfless mother!!

Nette Onclaud April 17, 2017 at 2:28 PM a very sensitive verse well done, sara.. huggs

Jan Allison April 17, 2017 at 11:15 AM Brought a tear to my eye as my aunt used to do a similar thing with her food ensuring other's got fed before her and she had the remains - on one meal she soaked bread in gravy to make it look like she had meat. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx