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My Wishes

If I could rub a magic genie how sweet would that be To have three special wishes granted to me I would close my eyes and take a deep breath Then I would wish for Love Peace and Happiness Love is my first wish I wish I could keep all the love in my heart Fighting with my vision is tearing me apart Peace is my second wish Bringing my family together we all do wrong But why oh why can't we all just get along Happiness is my final wish Writting poetry books is my ultimate wish To become a famous poet and share this special gift These are my three wishes and I will not rest Until I have in my life Love Peace and Happiness FOR THREE WISHES CONTEST

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James Fraser

Date: 5/2/2010 7:10:00 AM

Three wonderful wishes Faleshia, many congratulations on your win in Amy's fine contest >> James

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 5/1/2010 8:11:00 AM

love peace and happiness that want we all wish for, lol the beginning made me laugh cause i imagine you trying to rub the actually genie lol, congrats on your HM n.n

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/30/2010 9:12:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest, Faleshia! Very nice! And thx for leaving comments on my writes...Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/29/2010 8:40:00 PM

Congrats Faleshia on your HM in Amy's wishes contest .. a wonderful honor for a wonderful write from a wonderful poetess..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Destiny Orschell

Date: 4/22/2010 5:25:00 PM

Good luck in the contest!!! Enjoyed reading your poem. -Destiny

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/22/2010 11:49:00 AM

I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Faleshia. I wish you the best in the contest and with your wishes also. Thank you for your always kind comments. Love, Carol

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 4/22/2010 11:37:00 AM

Nice entry for Three Wishes Faleshia, Thanks for stopping by my poem and for your kind comments! Jeralynn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/21/2010 7:41:00 PM

SOUP MAIL... and good luck in Amy's contest with this beauty...luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2010 3:34:00 PM

Love, peace and happiness are wonderful aspirations, Faleshia. I hope all are in your future. Ask that "genie" if he has access to a crystal ball :) Love, Carolyn (Best wishes in the contest!)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2010 2:35:00 PM

Wow ! this is way better than mine. I can say your poem rocks..Love the 3rd one . I kinda want one of them for my self..p.d.