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My Wish Turns Into Astonishment

I throw a coin, murmur my wish, it's twirling while going down, like it has ear that can hear a dancing sound nearby. I'm shocked and shook my head, 'coz the coin comes back and says: "Ouch! You hurt me!" "The well has no water!" I wipe my sweats, suddenly spank my face to make sure I'm not sleeping, why the coin speaks?

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Date: 9/25/2020 5:20:00 AM
Throwing of coins is popular the world over. I throw a coin and wish. Maybe someone notices my poems. ~~
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Date: 9/25/2020 5:30:00 AM
Your wish is already granted Victor. Your readers are a lot. :) Thank you as always V from the bottom of my heart.

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