My Wish Turns Into Astonishment

I throw a coin,
murmur my wish,
it's twirling while going down,
like it has ear that can hear
a dancing sound nearby.

I'm shocked and shook my head,
'coz the coin comes back
and says:
"Ouch! You hurt me!"
"The well has no water!"

I wipe my sweats,
suddenly spank my face
to make sure I'm not sleeping,
why the coin speaks?
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Buhagiar Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 5:20 AM
Throwing of coins is popular the world over. I throw a coin and wish. Maybe someone notices my poems. ~~
Tuazon Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 5:30 AM
Your wish is already granted Victor. Your readers are a lot. :) Thank you as always V from the bottom of my heart.
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